Group Sex Story Comments

very erotic, loved it,,complete honesty with spouse is paramount,,the sex was awesome..

lovely family tradition, more like this please!!

cant imagine this happening without fucking each others spouse as well,,cool premise, something to look forward to each year,,

looks like it's still incomplete, hope for chapter 4

Nice

Love the story. Hope to see more

Ray

Oh, if I were only Dex Danger in that room of pornstars! This is not a stand-alone story, one should read the previous chapters for the whole story.

It make me so horny right now!

Im a wife, a very horny wife. Please dont leave me/us hanging, with Darcy telling Marcus how interested she is. You can take this hot story in so many different directions.

I love reading erotic material. Most almost puts you to sleep, same themes, same characters, same cliches.

NOT THIS ONE! This is one of the best stories that have I read. Sweet, touching, erotic, tender story of love, sex, and romance all rolled into one. I am a male, but I...

So, where is the “romance”?

My wife & I have been swinging since we first met. I've seen her sucking & fucking since we 1st met, Well over 2 dozen men. I'm bisexual & have sucked off half the men she's had. We have no intentions to quit.

So, ... It's been 4 years since publishing this. Is it safe to say the author needs to remove the "{To be continued... }" at the end. Apparently, the two couples didn't hook back up ...

I have always wanted to participate in an orgy. This story sounds very believable and if real I’m jealous

I loved how the uninhibited German couples engaged the American couple. It all seemed so natural and enjoyable. I can't help but think there was an experience that led to the writing of this story as is the case with most of mine.

I know I wrote a bunch in that comment, but I really am enjoying the story.

It’s a good story. You and your editors have done well. Not sure any of you realize, but everyone just worked through the weekend. The warehouse staff can cause serious problems with deliberate inventory mismanagement - Sam should have handled Frank more privately and cautiously....

Something Lizzie overlooked: sex on company time, at a company facility, is solid cause for termination of all involved.

Well, that was disappointing. But, not unexpected given the issues and minimal effort on his part.

Should change your moniker to cuckold gerald

Well... that's it for me... not a redeeming value in any of the characters in this story... the worship of degradation, humiliation, and cuckholdery.

I lolved it when thay are licking each outhers cum it is so hot. What I love is licking cum off tits.

More of this Team, please! You've created an insatiable group of readers, and only have yourself to blame.

I loved this story, even with the abrupt ending. Spec writes interesting characters who have real motivations and the sex is always hot. Would love to read more about these couples.

Well up there with the other DuoHalo stories. I especially enjoy entries which move away from the USA,

I wonder if anyone's working on stories from non-Anglophone countries - other than the present Russian one. It would be best if they were written by a native or, at least, a long-term...

I, on the other hand, thought your remark about Republicans and common sense was the funniest part of this chapter..

I don't care too much for eating out women that have fresh, or worse, not so fresh, semen of other men dripping out, but hey, that might be just me...

The angle with...

Joni loves her job and loves being filled with cock in all her holes. Now she is an exhibitionist as well. She won't take cash tips for her fucking because she is not a "whore," but a dedicated and very enthusiastic slut for her four bosses. The author is suggesting that Joni will...

I appreciate a good story that doesn't complicate itself, while still allowing the characters to get fleshed out enough to feel real. Well done! Also, stories with more than two people can sometimes get confusing if the author doesn't differentiate between the characters, so having...

Outstanding 5 stars

This author has a few cliff hangers now in the story series category.

Shame. sigh

Hmm enjoying the story and hoping the author continues, but seeing other similarly hung stories, it doesn't look good. Hoping I'm wrong.

Good thought. There will be a sequel, 'Joni's Next Job'. A black office where that might work in.

I think Joni is going to need some help soon. Perhaps she has a female friend that also needs a job?

This needs a sequel so hot

And then there were five—five girls, five lovers, and five ⭐️s. I wish I could be a Chicago resident and vote early and often. This chapter, for me, is top three in the hallowed halls of the BTC.

Story was good, but the writing lacked maturity. See if you can find an editor who can help you develop. Look up possessive apostrophes - most of yours were missing, which makes reading difficult. Short sentences, while better than too long ones, are to be used in moderation. I...