Gay Male Story Comments

Putting a cock into your mouth for the first time, is a life changing experience. There is nothing else like it. You realize you have just became a cocksucker. it's startling, but you can't get it out of your mind.

You want it to happen again.

It does happen again, and then again....

Great start! I can’t wait to see what happens next!

When I want a lesson in proper grammar, I go to school for that. When I need to get off, I turn to Literotica to read hot stories about slutty bad boys just like this one.

Wow I always dreamed on taller manly alpha male younger bro to step into a daddy’s role! I guess he will also have deeper voice.

I have been to several sleez motels looking for just that but always chicken out. That was so intense I wish it would be me doing both!

I love it so fucking hot! I came on parts 1,2,3. I would love to have you as a friend and return the favor.

The sexual connection is electric, the descriptions burn with heat, and the deepest layer of all is the tenderness and love between them. It's a beautiful piece of writing, and a wonderful pleasure to read. Thank you.

The story was very erotic. Not that it matters i guess. There was nothing in the story about prep for bottoming which could lead to a mess if it was a virgin guy reading the story......just saying

I love this story. The sex is great and the idea of the marriage ceremony to become a secret wife is a mind-blowing turn on. This is such a clever and appealing idea that I am going to get secretly married too. The proposal, the ceremony, the honeymoon will be well scripted and acted...

You do realize that you repeated the same story twice in this post. It always amazes me that authors don’t proofread what they post.

It’s well written but I’m not a big fan of domination.

Well, I couldn't be happier. While I'm always excited when I pull up Lit and find one of your stories on it, I wasn't expecting Cam and Frankie to come back to warm my cockles again. And judging by the reaction of other parts of my body, the sex scenes in this were pretty damn warming...

The fact that it's true makes is all incredibly hotter. I'm picturing his face with your cum all over it. Beautiful.

Those little rooms were such a perfect place to go. Nothing to think about or look at or care about except cock. Reading this story makes me drool.

This is your best story yet. You really excel in relationship building and romance. I like how contained the story is as it allowed for a deeper dive in the characters. While I enjoyed all of your stories, I particularly love this one the most at it was realistic and didn't take me...

Love my Palm Springs erotic masseurs! Always an awesome experience!

Great story with perfect pace for me.

Oh wow so hot. Had to stroke my cock as the newly ate the cum.

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Unfortunately, there’s is a certain lack of grammar which is really disturbing.

Made me rock hard and drooling pre. Can't wait for the next chapter! Well done.

Hope there’s more to come! So hot

you are exactly correct - when the sex is as amazing as they sounded it proves man on man sex is absolutely the best. when I'm able to be under an amazing cocksmen like Carson it's easy to let myself become his bitch.

Good writing but no sex and overuse of the word fuck. Not my favorite.

Beautiful story and it turns me on

WOW...just WOW!

Wow that was so fucking hot

Made me cum hard

Can't wait for more, man. So hot reading how Brian is discovering his inner slut. It's gonna be a fun ride filled with buckets of cum. Nothing as hot as gay sex. Nothing. I've never been so horny or so slutty as I am since I learned I love submitting and worshipping cock. Brian...

More please, absolutely!

Mr. Athens man now u really have me wanting u. I stumbled across this story .I can't wait for u to see me in my jockstrap and u in a red garter, both of us hard

Thanks for reading guys, I hope you approve with how things turned out for these guys!

Started reading this, sounded like it could be interesting but had to stop with the " correct " pronouns". Sorry, I am old fashion. They/them is plural. My brain will accept a lot but not that!