Comments on Novels and Novellas

Sir, I give you my No Prize that I received from Stan Lee in 1984. Take care of it, you earned.

Excellent!!! Nuff said.

As always, a skilled writer, but this time, too much WrestleMania sex getting in the way of a better yarn.

Always incredible.

This is a good light series. Please don't let this lapse if you so kind.

By far, this is the best thing I have ever read here

I'm looking forward to reading the last parts. So far this has been a great series. Totally enjoyable. BardnotBard

Damn, endo is a bitch & sounds like Gwen may have been a bit sexual even before then. Hope the vax gets the endo sorted.

Also that last line is really ominous

maybe the loss of the watch was worth it for the information. Will she help protect Ana in his absence?

Each piece of this series is it's own masterpiece. Together they make combo of epic proportions. Just loving it. BardnotBard

Eagerly awaiting next chapter

Let us know where you are leaving to if you leave Literotica, okay? I understand your position completely and it's ridiculous that Literotica isn't taking action.

This guy can fricken write. Damn! What a story. I barely like any of the characters but I'm caught. You got me!

My problem with Wendy is that she did know she cheated, but she wanted to justify it. She obviously hid it and therefore she knew it wouldn't pass the husband test. She just needed a pretext in order to be a slut.

I'm commented several times that you write for the thinking man: I can certainly appreciate how you've carefully chosen the historical figures and interwoven them into this fiction, as Hugo de Moncada was an exceptionally capable soldier, and you've used his historical accomplishments...

What started as a semi-realistic step-taboo story, turned into an incel's shitty fantasy. All the harem shit ruined the story. Sweet talking and seduction works. Making bitches submit to a magic cock and somehow not getting jealous of each other is just stupid. He started acting like...

Hurts to read !

You are hands down the best writer on Lit.

You could make a tech manual on mainframe computer maintenance sexy and readable.

This is a fabulous story.

And when he returns in 20 years out of the Sim, there's a million more stories you can tell.

BRILLIANT!!!

Rock on !

FDD

Wonderful story and great storytelling. I too am an old (dare I say very old) romantic. I loved the story. Thank you.

Loving the storyline - thank you

It seems you have read a lot of older writers of western Loar & picked a few of their tricks up. These boys you write of could be "Sackett's" or "Chantry's" hell mebbe even "Killkenny"!! lol you write well & with a few/better proof reads you will turn error free work out! You turn...

Fucked up couldn't do anything but skip through it.

1 less star for every name screw up!!! Seem to screw up who Holloway is!!

I nice parting gift for Ana, now what will the change of employer bring, and will Javier honor the agreement

Revenge fizzled out like a wet fart. He barely got to see it after all. His wife and daughters working with Gavin to expose his dirty business dealings so he couldn't do shit in a divorce would have been better.

Wonderful that Hypergamy is back!

I really enjoy the character, her wisdom, a d your creativity as the author.

Every story I have read of yours the names get jumbled. This chapter had David watching with Aimee while David (not Tim) held Jenny’s hips doing her ass.

Excellent series so far. Am sure the other parts will be as good as the first two. I've no knowledge of the music industry but the description sounds accurate and believable. Even if its not I'm not worried as I'm just enjoying a quality story. BardnotBard

Absolutely scintillating series thus far. All of 5 stars well deserved the whole way through this tale.

On the contrary, I love investing time in a story such as this. This is how erotica should be done, a great story foremost, but interwoven with wicked hot monkey sex. I regret that I just found it and am off to read the next chapters. 5/5 stars, and I'm sorry they don't allow me to...

Great storyline. Hope you will have more chapters to tie up the ending?

I’m not an historian, but I enjoy the degree of detail you’ve woven into this story. Keep up the good work.

Amazing story so far.

I love Q and basically everything delivered but this is so heavy on the music and concert info that I admit to skimming a bit. There was a sprinkling of detail about poor April and the pregnancy, but otherwise 2 pages of concert play-by-play. Thanks and hope life is getting better!...

I don’t know what to think about Sam thinking Robert behaved like a bully. He was reacting to a direct assault on his family, having recognized the need for urgency. Pulling the Guardian Program, IMO, is similar to seizing a drunk driver’s car: a justified penalty for a serious violation....