Erotic Couplings Story Comments

Ugh!!! Way to ruin fishing.

Not one of your best but not bad either. Keep writing.

Good premise and well written. I liked that hubby was bright enough and trusting enough to play along without missing a beat.

Really!?! Yer gonna leave us hanging and not add Laura to the Mix!

Good work. Please continue this story.

Loved it. Keeping things spicy between a loving monogamous couple should be everyone's fantasy.

Jujitsu move there! Nicely done. 5*.

That is an AWESOME storey, had me wondering what she was going to do. This could have a number of more chapters, with them doing similar adventures, or maybe buying the Withlacoochee River in Sumpter County property and having fun there. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I very rarely comment, but I really liked this and am surprised that there are no comments yet, so I'm leaving one. Someone commented the previous story that the romance factor was really good, and I agree with that. I also like the kinky factor in both these stories. The last...

I really like how you revised this story to deepen the emotional component and thereby heighten the erotica impact. Her masturbating in front of him was a great switch in the characters' vulnerability. You should definitely keep writing. I would suggest a slower build up where you...

Thank you, Bargyn1!!! Really appreciate that. Hope you enjoy my others!

Very sexy!

I have found a few places that need edited. How can I do that?

Very well done! I enjoyed it!!

They seem to be getting better and better. I hope to see BFF gaining more and more control over gf even when BF isn't around. maybe she could have do all cleaning cooking, laundry (handwashing pabties f course) Akso can't wait for the wedding and honeymoon, maybe no sex wedding night...

Please write the next part soon as I loved it Thankyou ❤️

Love it but the wife deserves a divorce on her terms; I'm sure he won't miss his children.

Hot.

6’9”?

He wouldn’t have been a FBI agent and regardless of his shape, he wouldn’t have passed the physical at 64.

Many thanks. I enjoyed the story. Mainly BECAUSE it was a married couple that were both intelligent enough to immediately catch on what was happening then decide to take advantage of the situation, for themselves. Playing out the role of a "hooker" with her own husband is an often...

Cute as all get out. Well written and tightly focused. Thanks to the author for deviating from the typical cuck bullshit.

I enjoyed the story, very different than the usual. I liked Keri telling the guy to go home to his wife.

There's nothing new or surprising in the story. I've seen all this and more in numerous casting couch porn videos. Next time please introduce some surprising twist in the story.

This is a story that begs for a finish, please continue.

I was fearing it'd get monotonous, but you keep the fires burning. Good writing, real characters. Less mechanics needed AFAIC, but that's just me i'm sure.. tx

Surprising change for the woman to use the man for stress relief. Wham bam. Curious as to her sex life that she wants to cover...is it just work or has she other secrets. Another chapter of two plz

Really nice and romantic.

While this story is somewhat "real", I do take exception with one major point.

I have never seen nor heard of an Aussie male cry just because he missed out on a root.

It might be different if Essendon lose to Footscray, or the Storm lose to The Raiders, or Fosters has an explosion...

bruh

Just finished your first five parts of this story.

Kind of a "slow-burn" story !

But so good !

Worth the patience. Thanks.

Belgian Chuck

Thank you for your kind words! I don't know if I'll write more, I feel as though this fantasy was enough for me to express. It's pretty wild to think that I'd share so much of myself with absolutely random strangers when I can't with my closest person. I suppose there is safety in...

I'd like to read more of Tina's advances in her line of work :)

Great job! Loved it. 5 Stars!

So much cum in that house, i suspect it;s ankle deep.

Good premise.

But confusing scenario.

Starts out fantasizing about Dani. Begins to rub his cock. Is spotted by Kimberly. Kimberly's mouth on his cock. He cums. BOOM.

No foreplay.

No Kimberly exploring his cock and imagining/describing what she wants to do to it.

No determinating...