Recent reader comments on Literotica Chain Stories.
superbly crafted ! Great build up, but far too short!
All Comments/ReplyThis whole thing was a big yikes for me. I tried to skip over all the incest stuff, but it just kept coming and coming until I realized, "Oh, this is a full on incest story" and by then I guess I was skipping like 90% of the content. Anyway, I thought it had a fairly decent plot but...
All Comments/ReplyGreat story. Very exciting and erotic for me.
All Comments/ReplyIncredably horney . I would like to be invited round !!!
All Comments/ReplyWhere is the rest. Something must have happened to TTT.
All Comments/ReplyOne of the best stories I’ve ever read here and I’ve read several hundred at least.
Nicely written with good character development, lots of love and emotion, and two sexy women. Wish mom and Bret had kept it up some after dad was okay, but I understand% it was great that they didn’t...
All Comments/ReplyOUTSTANDING!!!
All Comments/ReplyAfter what she put Dan through, Sandy has no business whatsoever getting petulant because he made an arrangement for sex with his housekeeper. After all, he left because he knew she was planning to have sex with her 'boyfriend', for the stupidest reason imaginable. I would be reluctant...
All Comments/ReplyAccording to the early chapters released on his Patreon, he's currently working on book 5 of the Good Intentions series.
All Comments/ReplyConfusing. Who's the boss?
All Comments/ReplyI love the stories where they always happen to have a bed to tie the straps to in each corner!
All Comments/ReplyWell that escalated quickly, but when the stars align it just works. I do have a question, do ladies normally keep condoms in their nightstands? It just kind of surprised me that she had one that handy. Nice story that could go on for a few more chapters, thanks
All Comments/ReplyA little too long in coming, but a good read anyway.
At least it avoided the Literotica curse of being unfinished.
5 stars 🌟
Bill S.
All Comments/ReplyPretty different but I love it
All Comments/ReplyLoved the girl's attitude....
All Comments/ReplyThis is actually closer to the original myth but Medusa was already a monster when she slept with Poseidon.
All Comments/ReplyAwesome story, but not likely. That’s why we fantasize about these events. Who knows, it might just happen! Great job!!!
All Comments/ReplyFunny. Thanks. Liked the stangstar reference.
All Comments/ReplyThe sunset is dreamy, but the road traveled was full of serendipity. Like kids. It is nice to be comfortably affluent, especially with the exchange rate to beat the cost of living. The locals are very tolerant of 'el Norte immigrants. Why is that?
All Comments/ReplyHusband took on openly all his cuckoldry! Soon, Randy will be fucking him too. The women rule over his weak personality. Wadte of space and time.
All Comments/Replyinteresting twist towards the end, not sure if I like it. Really liked the FAWC cars and radio call in part as it was brilliant.
All Comments/ReplyJPB's written more than 850 stories but he still doesn't know how to write a decent ending.
All Comments/ReplyThis was good. At times I wasn't sure but it all blended well together at the end.
All Comments/ReplyStarted out great, but you just couldn't resist turning it into a cuck story!
All Comments/ReplyVery clever story using Greek gods. Your stories are well written and edited. The main character development was enough to give us feelings for them. Well done.
Another 5-😊😊😊😊😊
All Comments/Reply4 stars for a really silly story.
Although, he should have got Amy pregnant as well and kept her as his exclusive office wife.
Plus every other weekend he'd stay at Amy's house, while they had fun with their new baby.
All Comments/ReplyPredictably awesome, Todd.
All Comments/ReplyTo the Anonymous poster from six months ago either you didn’t read the story, or you don't know what a cuck is, or you are a troll.
All Comments/Reply"Papa says you are two foolish people. You need to kiss and make up, and eat before it gets cold."
=====> classic line, especially since delivered by a 10 year old.
All Comments/Reply"Can I come home, Dan?" she whispered.
After all we'd been through, the hurt, the turmoil, I thought the decision would be harder than it was. Maybe it should have been, but I knew in my heart there was only one real solution. My life was empty without her. I'd loved her most of...
All Comments/ReplyWOW, just WOW. Brilliant.
All Comments/ReplyGreat story. Long but touching.
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