BDSM Story Comments

Amazing stuff. Welcome back

Well written. Nicely described dynamics between needy baby girl and her partner.

Too bad I work on my vehicles. I would pay to break down and meet someone like that as she read my mind just by looking at me.

CNC, I am so near for it. Well written story, as well. Thanks for sharing!

jammin! thank you so much!

it is hard to answer the question "how much of this is fantasy, how much do i actually crave?"

i crave all of it, horny pussy wants all of it, thinking about every last horrible element of this makes me need to touch myself, and brings me closer to the edge...

Fifty shades of grey mixed with Cinderella (in this case, more like Cinderella). In real life, charming ”dominants”/“alpha males” (especially with two strictly separate personalities) are called psychopaths, and after a few years they are not so charming to live with.

In real life,...

Good premise.

Seriously lacks details.

"A few minutes later, she cums as I suck on her clit." That's it? That's supposed to be erotic? NOT!

Needs DETAILS. Needs dialog during whatever sex is happening/not happening.

Needs much more teasing/edging his cock before anything else...

Great plot and characterization. I could imagine an anniversary cruise where Toni and Cindy get more involved? Or a follow up where VIcki gives herself to fulfilling her sister's needs for darker, deeper domination.

I really need more of this. It's what I wish Fifty Shades had been!!! Please write more - we need to see how their relationship progresses!

Great story, man. Lots of themes that float my boat. Don't worry about Whackdoodle and the "anonymous" commenters that suspiciously share the same sentiments as him. Clearly he lives a life similar to Norman Bates and probably sits in a creepy room full of taxidermy and pee bottles...

This kind of pseudo psychology exactly why findom is so dangerous. If you have childhood trauma (as many of us do) seek professional help or look into tons of books on cognitive behavorial therapy. Online findom is not a solution, it escaltes very quickly with severe negative consequences...

Absolutely excellent, as many of your stories are. Enjoyed reading this, and you've left plenty of scope for a sequel.

Sorry, Anon, I think this is it. Not sure I could add anything that's not already in it.

Thank you for your kind appreciation.

Excellent.

Love to read the sequel and to know what will happen to TitSllut and her sister. Maybe a chance to try and plot a way to save their identity, a challenge to trick and trap two new girls. I am up to reading more and the ideas that follow for the girls. Count me as a vote.

I was driving home before reading this and it clicked why Niel bothers me as a person. He had that I'm going to do a fundamentally negative action and justify it with a moral standard of my own that now should be applied to you. I think the popular line with that is "I'm doing this...

So much to say, but all I want to add now is how much I appreciate you writing aboit the submission, embarasment, and arousal of getting fucked in the arse and giving a blowjob without any homophobia. That is so true and you wrote it, in this part and the last, so masterfully. Thank...

I was planning on going to sleep after reading this chapter. But holy fucking shit. No way. Becca you’re awesome. What a great story. Any man would love to have a woman like this talking him through this fantasy.

Wow! So well written! Details of the encounter so realistic and believeable, including Jennifer's feelings, both physical and mental. And the surprise ending. Perfect.

Now, may we look forward to a sequel? Has Jennifer had enough or will she seek more from the same...or perhaps a...

OMG I need mooooooore. Don't be a tease 😉

Superb! I fully enjoyed the time you spent on providing background for the two characters. I will be looking forward to further chapters. Thanks.

Aww what a sweet and loving story of a devious tease and her locked sub. I loved the moment where she warned him about the step he couldn't see.

I think this was my favorite chapter of this series so far. I love you how capture the way that a man can get addicted to the unrequited arousal ... and in the heat of the moment can choose more denial, over release. How do you know these things?

As the story says Steph needs to be turn into a piece of Fuckmeat for the enjoyment of all. Look forward to the adventures of here journey to becoming that. Cheers

I asked to have this one removed so I can resubmit and edited version. Fewer mistakes and a better flow. I am working on a sequel.

Awesome, Short, Fun.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

Thank you for your politely put feedback. I have no intention of deleting it. If you take the time to read my other feedback you will see I normally leave negative comments posted. They are only removed when they are both RUDE and anonymous

I LOVE your sensual and creative writing style,5 all day!

There is no genuine love and certainly no respect. Why ould anyone put up with this nonsense.

Not erotic, not exciting, not loving, just a sadistic misandrist getting sexual stimulation from hurting another human being and one she professed to love.

Damn, they really should allow Chapter 9 to get published here. Isn't all this fantasy? It's such a shame that Beth's liberation can be so difficult for some people to swallow. When she becomes her true self, it is something joyful and beautiful, instead of the frightening, sickening...

There's nothing wrong with these fantasies, as they are just that, fantasies. And to be honest, not as extreme as they can be. This story is very well written and a true exploration of the mind of a woman who is, quite literally, giving it her all.

Your fantasies are most enjoyable! Don't let others tell you what to enjoy! If you like pirates better then go for pirates! I say your writing is incredible. The way you describe Beth's state of mind and her every feeling of joy and pleasure and pain is very exciting! Looking forward...

Will you be writing any more in this anthology? 🙏

You have an unusual style of writing. It is dark and sad with dramatic overtones. Yes, it is addicting and makes me wonder how these characters go about their day. Only reading will answer my questionsl.