Romance Story Comments

Loved the start of your series here, on the the next one.

The way you handled the first meeting of your MCs is perfect - it's one thing to get to know someone on-line and perhaps on the phone/FT, but in-person is always a nerve-wracking moment because the actual act of act is so...

I’ve read a bunch of your stories now, I have to say that your MC’s really piss me off. With his hot head temper, he not only hurts the ones that love him, but in his stupidity, misses out on years of what would have been a fulfilling life. Other than annoying issue, they’re not bad....

And you have done Donna an absolute honor. You have also lived a courageous life. I have also dumped religion as authoritarian and only interested in power and wealth. A five. thanks

Very offbeat and original, a touch overly sweet in places, but as it’s a romance I guess it’s par for the course. Definitely a 5⭐️ from me!

well worth waiting for

The one page chapters are irritating. I would rather wait a bit longer and get more at a time please

Five stars

Crap! (exclamation of how I feel, not description of story). Well written but I don’t want reality. I have to live with it every day. It’s just nice to read ‘happily ever after’ every once in a while. LM

Nice gentle story of ordinary folks doing the right things. I really enjoyed this. BardnotBard

What a fun read! Thank you

A very nice story, a very nicely written story. 5 stars

Your right, do what makes you happy, life is too short

I hope you and David continue to be happy

OMG! That was an amazing read. It was so engaging I could feel his angst and loss of control. I could feel his emotions and how strong they were. I was so relieved at the end as it was exactly how I hoped it would turn out! 5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 & 5 ❤️ ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Ehh, what the hell would he want to do with a crazy woman. The next story after they get married would be a great LW story!

She accuses' her husband of an affair and sleeps with his best friend or employee and throws it in his face. He divorces her and starts up with Sarah, has kids...

Excellent story, this came out right! They each escaped their own dead or destructive marriages by finding each other while doing a recreation they each love.

The billboards were a great touch!

Don't bother with part 2, this was bad enough.

Not intetesting at all

Best story I have read in years. I have read it 3 times and it gets better each time. Props to you for your writing.

No, not my end. The previous revision was as beautifull as life itself.

I’ve read several of your stories, and your dialogue writing, story flow, and attention to detail are all very solid, you sometimes go way too far to build tension/drama. Liam’s a complete ass that no one would put up with, and no sibling who cares even a little for her sister would...

Wonderful, beautiful and romantic story. Definitely 💯 percent deserve a five star ✨✨✨✨✨ ratings for the whole series.. sincerely from Singapore

Willow need serious psychiatric help. Ayla was way more lovable than her sister. Liam should run as far away from Willow as he can get.

A comment to all the vets and active out there, I love you all brothers and sisters. We're in this fight for the long haul. We were taken out of the war, but the war was never taken out of us. Keep on fighting and surviving for us and our fallen because we carry their legacy.

10 stars! Probably one of the absolute best stories on this site. Very emotive.

Enjoying. But wish you would not make it so many different posts. Irritating to have to keep chaptering up.

this was good

No kiss at the prom? Seriously?

thank you for these wonderful stories. The characters all seem fully developed and living in alk of our memories.

. Thanks again and get back to work on the next story. please.

As far as the writers with kids graduating college while they’re in their 40’s our youngest graduated before we were 45 and that was after his first tour in the sandbox. Having kids at 16-19 isn’t strange it’s the norm for a good share of the USA . And my wife and I went to college...

Second or third time I've read it and it's really well written, despite some typos and a missing word or two, Faith/CC/Carrie is a fascinating, complex and well-drawn character. A follow-up would be really interesting.

Irony. The difference between saving one life (touching) and letting 40,000 people be massacred, 1/3rd of them helpless children due to ordinance from USA taxes is incongruous if not inconceivable. (Nice story?)

Any of the forms of dementia are horrible. A friend of my parents hit this in her early 30’s she exhibited all the signs of alcoholism at first. Then it hit hard, she ended up sharing a room in the nursing home with her mother. Neither one knew the other.

I wish I had a re-do with my father. I was a lazy, unappreciative son. He gave me much over the years, but passed away with ALS at age 56.

Earle

BTW: Excellent story.

Since I am from Western Canada, I only have some spotty high school French but I did appreciate the francais in your story. Keep up the good work!

God this is the best. Its essentially "I intend to write a story which suggests that trauma can easily be cured in 24 hours by meeting someone new. Further, I will tell the reader to ignore that the emperor has no clothes and to believe he is wearing Armani. In fact, I will...