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"Unwittting Porn Star Wife:" Having read this particular story is way off base for me! I'm an incest (blood-kin related, XY - XX) male/female incest glutton fan from the gitgo.....AND I'm very appreciative when anticipated or actual pregnancies occur! Of course as particular as...

A joyous and arousing vignette of a sacred fetish and the warm libidinous desire of human life!

We never do know what tempting thoughts torture the minds and souls (and genitals!) of our neighbors, whether in a laundromat, at a cafe, or in the sanctuary of our church.

Fortunately,...

I really would have enjoyed it more without the cigarettes and smoking. But other than that, it was okay. 👍 3/5

Sexy and fun but a bit contrived. A slower burn with some communication would have been more believable.

I really enjoyed this chapter.

I'm kind of hoping that Erika/Nika isn't really dead outside of the simulation.

Conveyed with love and compassion, well done.

me next please

Thanks for your writing,

Fun, thank you.

***Thanks for the read.

Thanks for your reply to my Comments, (author of "Carla Dancer") "flipnmelonfarmer"; Thanks also for your salute to those of us who ended our undergraduate years (way back, now) in 1982.

I had *not* read any of your other stories; I may look at at least one to see how much they resemble...

Good story!

5

Meh. I was a fan until the article came out.

Loved this! You should definitely turn this into a series where Mia and Beth keep tricking Lacey to get into humiliating and compromising situations so they can take advantage of her.

Loving everything about this story series please keep it up

I think he needs to take the subway home. 😁

Good story!

5

Thanks for your writing,

I enjoyed reading this response to the February Sucks story, but it got kind of silly at times or maybe just a little over the top and a bit inconceivable. Still it was a fun read where all the stars were aligned and the ducks were in a row. Poor Linda, the whole world was pissed...

Excellent story. I'm glad it was a dream. 5stars

Loved it!

Points given for the correct use of the word "apprised: vs. "appraised" as most numbskulls would, but points deducted for the use of "shuttered" when "shuddered" is what you meant. Still a good overall tale with twists, turns and humor, good for five stars.

Too much sex. Too little story.

Incrediably hot!!

Hope there is more after the second one...

So I'm confused, is Terry married to Vanessa or Janet? You changed the marriages somewhere between page 3 and page 6.

Interesting story!

5

Annabelle, when I finished this chapter I just wanted to stand up and applaud. I've come to expect excellence from you and yet you still manage to astound me with your story-telling and imagination. <applause><infinite>.

To the commenters with the 'release the kraken' comments: thank...

I agree with those who said that a follow-up is needed. This was a story that touches a lot of places that people want to ignore, such as the difficulty of veterans transitioning back into society and violent criminals who have been treated softly by the system. Without those elements...

I’m sorry I wasted my time reading this tripe.

Thanks for your writing,

Actually one of my favorites from this author. It reveals the psychology of the narcissist and why they make bad spouses, namely that they are always looking around to trade up and never consider the collateral damage.

"Late Night On The Love-seat with Mom:" - A great story about a devious, though novice son, mother and their juggernaut of deception from the husband/son. The story is great, a fabulous theme, characters and their roles and dialogue!! Toooo abrupt and fucking short!!

Yes, it is very unlikely, but the one-in-a-million happening does happen … about once in every million happening. And it can happen at any time during that million.

In a short story, an author should allow him-/her-self to use no more than one implausible happening.

5*.

Sorry, but the explanation of the story and the afterthought, kind of ruined it for me. These are basically fantasy, bur t interjecting a separate reality blows the whole thing. I refuse to grade a story on grammar unless it's so bad I can't read it. Agree with some comments that...

Nice story, I hope there is more!