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Finish the damn story

Great story. Could do with another 2 or 3 chapters

The illustrations were amazing!

Kudos to the artist!

Loved the story. Lots of ups and downs emotionally but the biggest was Dottie not coming home after her court ordered visitation with her mother and then Billy putting the football in the casket with Dottie. That was hard to read.

Absolutely in the top 5 of stories I've ever read on here. Well done!

Such a hot and sexy series. -Mike

Bitch! Hope you got the clap. haha

I didn't want to swear, but fucking brilliant, a great story written very, very well. Although a pity there will be no sequel I totally understand. Big can of worms.

Thank you, sorry only 10 out of 5 stars.

Good story but the part about Candice and mom being together was really sad yet the part that they only did it while he was around was understandable

Better hope you never piss her off. Otherwise, you'll never wake up. lol

Great ending. ♥️ the line about connectedness and atonement. Very spiritually fulfilling.

Hey, I thought it was agreed not to share my sister's activities with the GP.

Awesome writing, thanks for sharing

Good well written story, 5*

Timewaster

Good chapter. Don't worry, the big studios never sue any Literotica writers for using their "intellectual property." Not worth the lawyer money or public embarrassment to them

"After she had performed her penance of four Hail Marys, three Our Fathers, and two Stations, she drove to the nearest Starbucks. If that's all you have to do to get past adultery, no wonder so many people do it over and over."

Great thought. Well written story with fine twists to...

Hey how about a story featuring a babysitter who gets bound and gagged by the boys she's babysitting, after they get into their DILF father's bondage gear? After she is left in the basement for some time, the father comes home and uses the opportunity to fulfill some of his suppressed...

Very nicely told !

A bitter sweet story, beautifully told again.

I can't help wondering if Jean Bimbeau is the kinky cousin of Leland from Needful Things, lol ;->

One of my favourite stories on this site!

Wonderful pacing and introduction to spanking

Hmmm, if they think so highly of her. Would they lie for her? Extra's aren't usually taxes, especially for someone I'm assuming is untrained in business taxes. And I agree with Mike below as well.

Not sure white hot sex is the best way to start a relationship, but it makes for an interesting story. Guess this one gets a one pickax handle rating. POW! And five stars as well.

Great story so far. Looking forward to future chapters.

Josh the “player” is now being played by Taylor who despite seeming naive, knows exactly what she wants. She proclaimed her love for Josh, and seems magically totally uninhibited when it comes to sex. Taylor is very, very smart and incredibly beautiful, with, apparently, a body to...

Another ronde original! You have skills to be able to describe so many different situations realistically. Thanks for this story and so many others I've enjoyed.

For those that complain about a misspelling or an incorrect phrase, I say give them their money back that they paid for...

I think she should give him the ok to jerk-off while she's giving him a shower show, or he just does it while she's got her eyes closed and maybe covered in suds.

Sadly more near the truth than most of the Living WIfe stories, which in the main safe highly fictional. Did I enjoy it, I doubt anyone could, but I appreciate how well written it was and gave it 5*

I now realise why the score is high. A beautiful story beautifully told.

I continue to love it

Your writing is interesting and flows well. Thanks for writing this, and good luck with future stories!

I'll engage once on this before moving the conversation with my author colleagues to private messaging. especially for Hooked1957, whose work I respect, but also for KRD19254 and even Demothenes384bc. There is no bias or defamation. The traditions are real, not fictitious. You failed...

The irony here is that Sandi and Rob had talked about the start up company and she agreed the project had potential and Rob should join his brother and go for it. What was she expecting? That he'd have to work from nine to five from Monday to Friday?

Good, plausible story. Thanks...

Hhhmmm...so many comments...so positive...you must be proud!!??

I am gonna do THIS-you REALLY need to edit/proof-reading you work!! As good as it is (and I DO mean this!!), the errors distract/detract from the telling of the story!!

Still, a Five**5**Star tale. Moving on to Chapter...