Mary Lewis Saw It First

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A visitation begins on the eve of Halloween.
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Mary Lewis say it first – the flash of a white dress and the long tail of red hair.

"Whatever is that?" she asked.

Husband Calum put down his handle of beer, burped, and joined her at the window, peering into the gloom.

"Whatever is what?

"Oh, nothing, it must have been a piece of paper caught by the wind. "Let's go to bed and amuse ourselves by being inventive."

"Will that take much energy?"

Half an hour later, two properties along Craggy Close, the mournful Finn MacAdam looked out the kitchen window and saw a girl, aged about six, sitting on the old swing in their garden.

"Jessie come look; it's just a wee one."

"It's all I ever seen," Jessie sighed, continuing knitting black stockings for needy children in Southern India. Wool stockings, that is. So with that attitude she didn't see the little girl that night. But next night she did.

"Finn, come and look here."

"What, knitted a ladder into the stocking, did we?"

"No you fool, I'm getting supper, not knitting. Look out the window."

Finn looked and said, "Ah, that will be the Todd girl again."

"Again?"

"I saw her one the swing last night but you wouldn't come, too busy alluding to my small dick and knitting your damn socks for hothouse Southern Kenya."

"Southern India, they're stockings not socks and it wouldn't surprise me to find that Southern India doesn't have hothouses because their people eat curry, not tomatoes."

"Eh?"

"Forget it. Anyway, it can't be the Todd's child. She drowned in the loch eight months ago."

"Say what you like, it's the Todd's child."

Jessie lost her color and almost removed the top of her finger with the chopping knife. "Finn, don't say things like that to me; you'll stop my heart."

"You'll soon stop it if you don't bandage that finger."

Working over the first aid box in the tiny kitchen, Jessie asked nervously, "Where are you going?"

"Back to my chair to ready my 'Scotsman.'

"Aren't you going to talk to the wee bairn and tell her to go home?"

Finn coughed and said, "I don't go out talking to the dead after dark."

Jessie's eyes rolled up and she fell to the floor in a faint, fortunately with the blood flow already stopped by a band-aid.

Agnes Todd's and husband Charlie lay huddled together drunkenly on a bed of their clothes in front of the hearth. They'd just finished having sex.

"I suppose I best go and give that sniveling laddie his dinner."

"It's a bit late for him now; he'll be asleep."

"Then I'll wake him up, won't I, and forced it down his sickly little throat if necessary; or would you like to do that for me, you lazy sod."

"No," Charlie sighed. "Our understanding is you look after him, I ensure we have bread on the table and my reward for being so kind to you is I get what I want."

"I sometimes wonder if I'm too kind," Agnes giggled. "Shall we go again?"

The next evening was Halloween and almost everyone was out in the street in costumes trying to scare the daylights out of each other. Mary Lewis had refused to go out because she believed such a celebration was barbaric. It was much warming that evening so she sat in the conservatory facing the brick wall behind the properties that was high enough to stop little children climbing and running down to the loch, although it hadn't stopped Lorna Todd climbing it and tumbling down to drown in the deep dark waters. Calum called in to check on her, found she had the whisky bottle out, so joined his wife.

"Look, there's the Todd's bairn," Mary pointed.

"Well, go chew a crow," Calum breathed. "I'd recognize that cute freckled face and red pony tail anywhere. It's a miracle you know."

"I know. But I didn't see her climb the wall."

"She probably walked through it," Calum said, not smiling.

Mary saw that Jessie was at their window pointing out the child to Finn. She attempted to attract attention. Jessie saw the movement and waved. Mary held up the whisky bottle and she and Finn disappeared from their breakfast room obviously on the way over.

They sat at the table watching the six-year-old.

"We should do something," Finn said.

Mary covered her mouth in anxiety and said she wasn't going near the bairn. Calum suggested it was no use calling the police because they'd arrive with a dog that would go crazy trying to rip the girl to pieces only to find itself biting at air. He added, "I think it's up to the Todd's to retrieve their daughter. When they come in off the street he'll do his usual and go out to pee over the wall and will see her, the drunken bum."

"She's no better, the way she neglects that baby," Jessie said, correcting herself to say he was no longer a baby; he'd turn six in a few months.

They lined up their glasses for another round.

Mary cried, "Oh look!"

The sickly child had come out of the house and his sister – or what had been his sister – went and kissed him. It was miraculous – the boy lost his stoop and suddenly appeared to be a healthy child, although it was difficult to see in only indoor lighting escaping through windows.

One of the adults asked, "What now?

Jessie was fanning her deathly white face with a magazine. "I'm going out to fetch the Todd's."

"No stay," Mary said. "Look, here are the parents now, both carrying beer bottles to toss down into the loch. This will be interesting."

Although the lighting was poor, the shock on the faces of Agnes and Charlie Todd was evident. Agnes had a hand deep between those balloon breasts of hers, standing absolutely still while her husband was jumping up and down yelling over and over again, "Clear off you witch!"

The four in the glass conservatory would become material witnesses to the ensuing events although it never became recognized as a crime by the investigation authorities.

The two children looked at the antics of their father and clapped their hands, laughing happily.

"Go!" screamed Charlie.

Displaying no fear the small girl took her brother's hand and walked him straight through the solid brick wall and down the weedy bank.

"They'll drown," screamed their mother. Charlie stared at the retreating figures and said he didn't think so.

The six witnesses watched as the children walked straight out on to the water and then seemed to lift into the air and gradually disappear into the mist that lay off the land cloaking the water.

"Did you see that," Charlie shouted to the four adults in the conservatory. All standing they nodded aware there was nothing they could do. There was nothing anyone could do. The newspaper headlines would report 'Baffling Disappearance of Boy on Halloween' and the story would quote police as saying the six witnesses could not be shaken from their stories.

Normally citizens would be anxious and worried about a small child going missing. This case was different. Everyone except the police and supporting crime experts knew it was simply a sister coming to claim her brother from a horrible existence; she'd used her window of opportunity – Halloween night.

THE END

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sacksackover 17 years ago
I have mixed feelings about this...

The idea is novel, the actual execution less satisfactory. This author tends to tell stories in the manner of a weather report. The intense feelings that must be present here were just hinted at in a cool manner. As a result, i was left emotionally cold by what could have been a very moving tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
excellent, but so sad

Excellent story, it is just so heartbreaking that the parents could be so uncaring for their children

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
This could have been such a good story.....

Sorry, but this story is poor. The basic premise could have been explored so much better, a bit of suspense would have contributed so much, and last but not least, decent spelling and grammar would have helped!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
A bit of the Supernatural!

Eerie tale of seeing a little girl in a swing; only to find she was deceased months before that. Other supernatural goings on assist this fascinating plot. Wonderful Story!

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