Beautiful In Rain

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Walking in the rain
and in the pain
you are beautiful
as the force of water

               sculpts
                        your
                              form,

               subtractions
                          through
                                 erosions,

                 leaving
                          essential
                                  remainders

and the promise
to cleanse you,
the bones of your
essential aliveness
dancing their shine
through your flesh.

You are beautiful
in the rain and when
I kiss your mouth,
my bowed lip above
your bowed lip,

waters dancing down
                
                 as
                         from
                                  eaves.

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
A WALK IN THE RAIN

on a romantic beach. TK U MLJ LV NV

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
beautiful

... poetry (~_~) I especially liked the literary Art~ thanks for the wonderful read on a rainy night!

Seduceros2Seduceros2over 17 years ago
Wet...

Captures the musicality of rain very nicely.

Gothica_ExoticaGothica_Exoticaover 17 years ago
flowing

& Simply beautiful. I love the lay out, slipping down the page, complimenting the flow of the content.

cherries_on_snowcherries_on_snowover 17 years ago
Simply beautiful.

and I adore that last image. thank you S&D.

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