Wrinkling

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Wrinkling

Whether water wrinkles in the rain
rippling gray skies in reflection
or weather awakens the lake
to the concentric possibility
rainbowed in sunlight as it reaches
between clouds, the moistened rays
dip into the cool, sparkling surface
its fingertips wrinkling in the wet.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
well

crafted and thought out.. nice placement of words ...bluerains

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Solid

beautiful image, thank you. C.o.S.

Seduceros2Seduceros2over 17 years ago
Serene

Serene, and enticing. Thank you for sharing it. I want to say "nice," but fear that word would trivialize the mood you've created.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Zen like

I enjoyed reading this. The images created are very zen like and I love its mystical quality.

Mentioned in today's new poem reviews

oregon_galoregon_galover 17 years ago
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a damn good piece of writing!

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