Joselyn and Balthazar

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Beneath the tall giraffes
They lay in each other's arms
Bathing in each other's love
The breeze was cool but
Their skin was hot

Joselyn looks into her lover's eyes
She reaches to brush his forehead
In his eyes she saw the love he had for her


Balthazor looked into her eyes
He bathed in the love he saw there
All he wanted was her love
All he wanted to give was his love

The lovers lay in warmth of their love
Peace over took their minds
Love over took their hearts
Together they would have a wonderful marriage

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I would like to thank Sakismurf for the art work. It is great to have talented friends who are willing to help out.

Please come back to read the Joselyn's Journey to find out how Master Balthazor and Mistress {pet} Joselyn got together.

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
TILL THE GODS ROARED

and the universe tilted. TK U MLJ LV NV

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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An interesting image that rescues the words which could be so much better with a half hour of editing work.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
pronouncement.

Line illustration sets the mood for two lovers bound together by Love. With peace in their minds ~ and love in their hearts ~ the age old ritual of wedlock is imminent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Fab image

I loved the picture, simply great. The poem that followed is good but could be better, think about developing it around a strong image (like the opening line, which is beautiful)

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