- Erotic Poetry
- BeachTime Lovin'
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coastline lingers on my mind
asking, do you remember
when two bodies melted
slicked down oiled with hot
buttered rum. coke mixed
like sex, jinxed a concoction
of swirling bath time surf
loving. missteps, poked
eyes, sand gritted bums
shining in hot sunny glaze,
as two dazed lovers lazed
and worshipped like king
tuts tomb. pathways taken
trailed with whip-lashing
wishes,of how tha hell
do I get closer. so hot
I am surprised
we did not just melt
into each other
like bacon in a frying
pan. sizzle baby
... trout jumping
outta water spasming,
convulsing,
body jerks, bodies
slapping ... sex
should be so good
every time.
- COMMENTS
whaleeabout 16 years agoI can feel the heat, the sand, the oil. How I'd love to feel the sex. "How tha hell do I get closer?" Oh, I been there.
Wonder what Brian Wilson would do with this. It all works....now, can I have a cool drink 'a wotah, please?
My Erotic Trailabout 18 years agoYour poem was mentioned in the New Poems Review Thread~
thanks for the literary journey~ Art~
My Erotic Trailabout 18 years agosome have a hard time accepting what anothers feel till they put their own twist into it. I for one like the pure emotional passion of the souls relaying its thoughts in its purest form. I absorbed your pen and tied up your muse <grin...(~_*) a very nice write
