An Effect Of Power Unexpected

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AN EFFECT OF POWER UNEXPECTED

in toronto i met
a cute young oriental girl
that was from the china district
while at a night club.
she hadn't lived here
for very long -
four months to be exact,
yet her english seemed remarkable,
though coming from taiwan.
she wanted to know if i lived in the city.
i told her i was from erie pennsylvania
and staying at a hotel.
i could tell she hadn't any idea
as to where that was,
so, i simplified my response,
and told here i was from america.
her eyes lit up -
reached for my hand
and tenderly caressed it.
it was enough to make me realize
that being an american
was actually worth it for once!!

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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Wonderful

Loved the sweetness and tenderness ~ and yes the honesty of this rendering. Top Notch.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
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welcome back Don...It's good to see you around again.

Personally, I love Canada... apparently, so do you. Sabina

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
good

prose but I can't dance to it. sand

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Another's back from a little sabbatical,

Welcome back and stay awhile;

Next time if you really travel,

Try it out of the hemisphere;

Except for isolated exceptions

You'll find even warmer receptions!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Lovely

Lovely poem, loved the way your words flowed.

Great to have you back

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