Losing My Ryhme

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Losing My Rhyme

I lose my rhyme
every time
I tell of how I lost
my virginity

She was older
I was younger
lost in sensual
serenity

Sometimes
night offers a feast
that fulfills
lustful hungers

When virgin lips
steal a steamy kiss
that feels like a
cliffhanger

Losing restraint,
following her tongues volley
as our lips
plunderingly
press against each other
in a passionate force
of glacial gliding
sliding
across each other.

Fire works bursting
was only
my hearts vibrant pounding
in thunderous
rhythmic virginity,
the night I lost
my rhyme.

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lindianalindianaabout 18 years ago
Wonderful

Your poems are alway so evocative.

Thank you for sharing them with us.

dcpoet44dcpoet44about 18 years ago
nice feel......

in this one and a smooth read......nice work.....don

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyabout 18 years ago
A man with ... without Rhyme ~

I love the changes Art. You sprucingly

spiced this one up !! I love the rythm

and the imagery. Hot, and a bit deep

in places too. Keep'm coming,

for I see nothing wrong

with a bit of rhyme droppin' ~

Thinkin' I am gonna steal your muse

and have me a field day !!

*flowers* lol

wildsweetonewildsweetoneabout 18 years ago
~

not only interesting rhyming but also neat alliteration. well done.

wso

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
this in one of those fuzzy wuzzies...

and you do them so well...blue

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