Colors of Me

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Selena_Kitt
Selena_Kitt
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                :::::squeeeeeeeezing in:::::
      SSSSSSSSQUISHHHHH!  
      Hm. Don’t fit well in here.
      This painfully rectangular
      container, crated, boxed in
      claustro-casket packaging.
      Surrounded by sharp edges
      and straight lines, a perfect
      ly linear geometrical confine
      but already I am spilling out of
         restriction, bleeding red into th
             e
                                                                s e
     blue borders and       swirling into             deep
shades of       purple                   and

                                                seeping
d
      o
             w
                    n
                           ward
                     

             towards that “feedback”
             section

      filling in

                    all those blanks

             with the

                           colors of me.

Selena_Kitt
Selena_Kitt
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SealockSealockalmost 17 years ago
You are one of a Kind

Said it in the title.

hugo_samhugo_samabout 18 years ago
~~

Creative use of word geography to convey feelings. Thank you

Hugo

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Interesting.

I like the dripping words in this one. :)

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uabout 18 years ago
;)

wordplay and imagery...

good SK!

**HUGS**

~LB~

sacksackabout 18 years ago
rather unique....

I'm not sure if I would have separated the word "these" so much, it's hard to see. ("se" appears to just be dangling)

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