- Erotic Poetry
- Metamorphosis
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tendon flexed fingers
over a sanded plateau of taunt skin
indentation of insistence
enhanced by an arched back
let loose the moment
and live forever here with me
each part of body becomes a new world
exploration of electric seconds
charged air crisp and turbulent
here the current runs stronger
down the mountain of you
into my valley where every muscle
becomes strong banks to hold
the rush of you
further stronger
pulse of rapids over every rock and boulder
filling flooding through each crevasse
we meld
and become the sea together
tossing waves of lust
against unexplored shores
evaporate to the rain
seperating only to join again in violent storms
where we wash the canyons deeper still
- COMMENTS
Queen of Marsabout 18 years agoCreatively visual, your words filled my mind with an image, which is what good, descriptive poetry should do. Very HOT, dear.
LeBrozabout 18 years agoVery nicely done
Evolution of images;
From fingers on skin
To the change of images
With passion's metaphoric perfect storm.
