She brushes my hair at midnight

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She brushes my hair at midnight
Silver silk tent
And with each comforting stroke
I yearn for more

In the softness of the moonlight
I give to her my mane
I offer her my crown
As she moves
like a cat
around this chair
Silently sitting
holding me captive
with her eyes

Bittersweet torture
As her fingers part this plait
Swiftly feel as agile digits
Dextrously explore

Sufficiently enough to be precise
How I want her to caress
How I want more
Than mere functionalism

How I want her
To brush out my demons
And untangle my dreams
Straighten my thoughts
And let me shine

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Makes me feel like I am there

and that is all that counts for me!

Roma RRoma Rabout 18 years ago
lovely

i can relate

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Beautiful

You've captured a moment, a desire, a want and in a very lovely manner.

Harry LegHarry Legabout 18 years ago
Beautiful

I am no critic and thus can offer only my feelings. I thought it was lovely and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Nice work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
erotic

and still beautiful

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