She stands broken

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Droplets of rain fall on her face.
She cries out,
the stinging lash
smacks her.
Hits her.
Makes her scream.

They fall like acid
each one burning her flesh,
marking her.
Making her bleed.

She cries out,
"Freedom!"
"Freedom!"

No one hears her pain.

Mother Earth
cries out
the tears
that fall like acid rain.

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
COULD GAIA AID

in moments of time. TK U MLJ LV NV

hugo_samhugo_samabout 18 years ago
Strong

Bold and vivid imagery. It screams pain.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 18 years ago
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Doesn't matter if it is you or mother earth, either way it is a strong poem.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
Gaya

I am uncertain if this is you or mother earth? but...nice write

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Very moving

I like it. Thank You. Ronnie W.

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