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lobomao
lobomao
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I need to know
What is it
That word for
The part of the peach
The exact spot
Between the folds
Just below the tip
Where it folds no more
But lifts erect
Proud and full
The point between
Point and fold
The soft fur
Moist and heavy
On either cheek
It is there
I long to linger
Tell me if you can
So I can call to it
Between my teeth
Nibblegnaw teaste taste
But mostly moistly cherish
Oh what is that word
Something so wonderful
Must have a name

lobomao
lobomao
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dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
nice metaphor......

despite missing the spelling on tongue.....nicely done.....don

mojo_catmojo_catover 18 years ago
it's hard to tell

if you didn't spellcheck the title or if you put it there on purpose, based on the word mashups later in the poem. i can only suggest that you use the word "point" too much in the beginning-there are lots of synonyms available. it's good though, these are nitpicks :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
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Tasty although nameless!