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Click here(an almost acrostic)
Regale mine eyes with powdered flesh
Every pearl of perilled sweat
Preens the way for sumptuous treat
Each time my heart doth thresh.
All time deep breaths wash asunder
Twixt crystalline visions dealt quick on heat.
For whose big muscled chest doth beat
On mine, pink and soft down under.
Jam runneth over 'til the box cries "More!"
Ultra sensate ring my nerves once again.
Do wait a tick for the room not to spin,
Only to kick the cascade that you pour.
In poetry, close is aka "half-ass" attempt. You have it in you to do much better and after so MANY years on this site, seems like some of the real talent in the forum would have rubbed off onto you, M'Dear. Sadly, that talent has moved on to escape the likes of the snobs and attention whores. Keep up the excellent attempts. You ARE getting "closer"
Shakespearean style and <pardon the pun> an easy flowing one at that. This was a pearl of a poem, Judo. Thank you! <smile>
Vixxx