ZMP~ Leaves that don't fall

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Some leaves hold fast to the ground
hoping that the wind
won't push them around.

Some leaves never touch the earth
holding tightly to a tree
since the day of their birth

Some leaves hold fast to one another
a barren tree with just two leaves
on the ground clutters the others

Some leaves prefer to fly
spread out like a sail
and riding the winds high

Some leaves defy gravities call
rise to the heavens on a thermal
leaves that do not ever fall

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lindianalindianaover 18 years ago
Lovely

By far and away, my favorite of your works. Reminds me of "The Road Not Taken" by Robert Frost. Perhaps the imagery. But it is truly divine. Thank you!

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
**5**

Such powerful imagery; where were you when I needed this in High School English oh so many decades ago.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nicely written

Your style never ceases to come out in your works of arts.

Thank you for provoking thoughts from your readers..

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Ualmost 19 years ago
nice...

loved it! :)

Kisses,

T

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
lovely

wonderfully zen

~Syn

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