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Click hereLickable earlobes met kissing lips
and slipped between their skin.
Delicate strokes of a fingertip
stirred liquid needs within.
Our squirming hips and arms wrapped tight
heated senses gently pressed.
In a room too dark without a light,
I'm captured on his chest.
Seduced with giggles, induced by touch,
allaying all restraint,
Fingers floating...tempting; I indulge
in caresses very faint.
An expectant shyness swiftly eased
as tangled legs unlaced;
I gripped hot flesh and slickly teased
a wetness, subtly traced.
Groans ignited; desires filled; I
released him with a rush -
our trembling bodies softly stilled; heart
beats lazy in the hush.
Again, an undercurrent of joy flows through your words, subtle but unmistakeable. I enjoyed this immensely!
in your third and fifth stanza, you didn't rhyme the opposing lines as in all your others. I realize thats nearly immpossible to do, but It did interupt the flow of the poem, as I had to reread all that was before to see if the error was mine or a purposeful move by the writer.
otherwise, the poem is lovely, I like that it's light yet still hot.