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Click hereIt was a delightful weeding!
Got nasty crabgrass out first
followed by raucous dandelion
Quickly worked up a ravenous thirst
as prickly thistles went a-flyin!
Ruthlessly grubbed out chicory
Poison ivy turned red with shame
And that ancient smothering hickory
gracefully took the blame
Bittersweet gave a good fight
my hands were chapped and raw
Wild rose hung on tight
before yielding to the saw
But it was the sunflower, the lovely sunflower
which made the final cut
A fetching ten foot tower
that got me in the gut
And when I started a second time
It was so much easier to do
The one that committed a crime
The other that wanted to sue
I weeded out the baker
and that loser on deadly crack
Didn't miss the undertaker
yet someday he'll be back!
Got rid of a clinging stalker
almost pushed me to the floor
Escaped from a compulsive talker
couldn't take the crashing bore!
And that left me with you...
My morning and my night
Lone sunflower in the garden
Everlasting ray of light
It was a delightful wedding!
Sorting through the various personalities, eliminating the less than desirable ~ left with a lone Sunflower to light the days. Beautiful!
struck me many ways ,
but the greatest part was...
it gave me options of which
it would pertain, and some
I thought to be utterly
... delicious !
*smile pretty*
-sGp-
the bridge i spot the troll. it appears to me that you didn't take a good look at those that did comment on this piece as they are respected writers of lit. that vote will not stand as it will be wiped off the charts. if this piece is crap as you say it is, i don't see anything constructive to shape it as you would like to see it be envisioned in your mind. where is that? I don't see any reason for the type of comment you left. this is a fine poem!!
Pretty much crapola. Sorry, dude, but this really doesn't do much for the average joe. I'm not one of the faithful five givers. (May they awaken one day from their mutual admiration society and realize that all their self stroking has brought nothing but solitary orgasms.)
and thoughts similiar to my go postal piece. the characteristics of how yours is written (a bit subtler though)does remind me of the line movement in mine. i do believe that yours and mine show different solutions, but yet reach the same conclusions. you have a lot of imagery than i do with mine. nevertheless a wonder piece you have here.