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Click hereTo grasp at Beauty
such as a rose
You risk a prick
into your very soul
The eyes absorb the beauty
while the body feels the sting
the heart is lost in passion
and the mind is on one thing!
the Thorn
love's bite
Then to share in a feast
such as love
You risk a bite
into your very being
To savor the flavor of the flesh
the licking lips and skin that mess
a tongue and teeth that become one
when the lapping and biting is done
petals torn
the thorn fore-warned
I enjoyed the beat of this poem.. and the contrast of beauty so smooth and soft, with a thorn that pricks bites pain and joy all wrapped up in an ecceltic poem
nice read..
du~
not at all "thorny" to read...very moving and thought provoking!
moving as always nin~
the thorn of love?
an excellent topic and
nice delivery~
I like the bite too! <grin>