Thorns and Roses

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To grasp at Beauty

such as a rose

You risk a prick
into your very soul

The eyes absorb the beauty
while the body feels the sting
the heart is lost in passion
and the mind is on one thing!

the Thorn

love's bite

Then to share in a feast

such as love

You risk a bite
into your very being

To savor the flavor of the flesh
the licking lips and skin that mess
a tongue and teeth that become one
when the lapping and biting is done

petals torn

the thorn fore-warned

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Du LacDu Lacabout 19 years ago
Nice beat...and bite!

I enjoyed the beat of this poem.. and the contrast of beauty so smooth and soft, with a thorn that pricks bites pain and joy all wrapped up in an ecceltic poem

nice read..

du~

sacksackabout 19 years ago
I enjoyed this....

not at all "thorny" to read...very moving and thought provoking!

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
excellent~

moving as always nin~

the thorn of love?

an excellent topic and

nice delivery~

I like the bite too! <grin>

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