I Come Undone

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At the sight of you,
A million strings unwind.
I feel a tightly wrapped desire quiver,
until with one sudden breath -
I'm loosened.
My body becomes limp and heavy
with your presence.
You are my intoxication.

I taste your kiss like some succulent fruit,
The richness of a dark berry,
the sweetness of a summer peach,
the erotic tang of purple plum
throbbing life into my veins.
I've become greedy for you.

Your touch is a thousand pulses of
Fire.
I burn with you,
quickening
until I no longer
feel breath.

Your heart pounds in my chest,
My mouth speaks words that have no meaning
except in darkness.

I lie in your arms and pray
for Redemption.
Pray for the Salvation that comes with your
kiss,
You are my
Perfect Confession.

You are velvet and silk against my skin,
the Ice that thaws my raging,
You are sensuality, flowing along my limbs
Imbuing me with a passion unknown.

In you,
I come undone.

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foehnfoehnabout 19 years ago
Nice job!

Some parts truly amazing:

"Your heart pounds in my chest,

My mouth speaks words that have no meaning

except in darkness."

Now, that's *nice*...

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 19 years ago
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Hi! Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poems Review thread:

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?s=&postid=11260278#post11260278

Keep writing :)

moonblademmoonblademabout 19 years ago
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I loved how this whole poem flowed and pulled me in right from the start. This is beautiful eroticism indeed. I really like your style. Welcome to Lit, Bourbon! Hope to see more of your work here soon. :D