- Non-Erotic Poetry
- black water
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Click hereBlack Water swirls
sweetened by existence
spell casting brew
energizing
Hovered over and cupped hands around
black water's warming strands
slivers on streams
steaming
A potion for the awakening
a serum for the craver
Texas mud, Java's black water
coffee
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoBut I can rise above that all important omission (just don’t forget to mention it as TURKISH coffee in the Middle East; North Africa and the Caucuses though…). The reason? You got some of the main ingredients right, like the spell and the sweetness and the cupped hands - especially the spell. That spell effect worked particularly well with the nice insertion of the single words in-between the stanzas: “energizing:… “steaming”… “coffee”, like a portion of a whispered spell. All that is left now is to taste the coffee!
LeBrozabout 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,500 poems.
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LeBrozover 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews, a picking from Lit's archive.
LeBrozover 17 years agoOne of those well-done writes
That with one word makes you
Want to read it again;
With that subsequent read, so stimulating.
