- Erotic Poetry
- Liquid Love
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Click herei kneel
And look up at Him in anticipation
Hunger is in my eyes
A hunger only He can fill
He smiles
He knows i am in need
He knows the urgency
That i feel
i close my eyes
And it starts to flow
His liquid love
Falling upon my face
my lips part
And i taste Him
He is warm and bitter
But i do not mind
i crave the liquid
That He provides
It is a desire
i cannot control
- COMMENTS
hrnyhrnyabout 18 years agoJust checked your ad and went to see the submission. The way it is written is from lust and desire, real or imaginary. Either way it was very nice.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoNice work. Well written, sexy and shows that some girls do like it.
MT_Pitcherover 19 years agoVery well written poem about a subject matter that many people do not understand.
My Erotic Taleover 19 years agoYour poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poem Reviews"
thanks for the journey
Art~
Anonymousover 19 years agoi must say that i enjoyed your poem a lot! It really hits home for me and is a topic i, too, enjoy. Thank you for sharing this with U/us!
