Seven Moons

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Though seven moons our love lived for,
Under only one, did we confirm our union,
Though stars rose and fell,
Beneath them we sealed our communion.
With the softness of the dim light,
Against her back, so pale and white,
Her hands a fist of my dark hair,
Her skin like marble, smooth and bare.

With mystery present,
And passions fire burning iridescent,
As we made love beside the lake,
She gave me her soul and heart to take,
And in return I gave my all,
To be with her till Heavens fall.
Till Night skies turn red and stars go out,
My love for her remains devout.

I place my emotions within glassed cage,
To float upon oceans for another age,
I bottle emotions and place them in the sea,
For others,
To unbottle,
Upon distant shores.

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
This is very good

it could use some work, but overall is very powerful. A little trimming goes a long way. Nice.

Write on!

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
Your poem is mentioned

in Sunday's New Poem Reviews

sacksackover 19 years ago
"To unbottle among distant shores"

Oh yes, loved that ending! Bravo!

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