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Click hereJames could only remember one other time he'd felt this embarrassed and this wasn't anything like being caught with his hand in the cookie jar, teetering on a mishmash of boxes and tumbling down into his dad's arms. He shot a quick, appreciative wink to the secret servicemen who'd given him the warning. He wanted badly to wipe his hand across his mouth and turn around to adjust himself. But he did nothing but give his parents a small smile. "Is the dinner over already?" He was dismayed at the husky timbre to his voice.
Madeline was only feeling slightly guilty for interrupting. "All the guests have gone home. It's almost two." She tried not to laugh, really she did, and she mostly succeeded, except for the snort from between her lips.
Malcolm walked behind James, checking his watch, wondering how the hell so much time could have passed. "My apologies. I didn't realize it was so late."
James grabbed at Malcolm's arm, following him to the stairs. Malcolm turned around to look at him, feeling mortified at being caught kissing the President's son for the past two hours. 'It hadn't felt that long' was all Malcolm thought. He was going to pass off some banal 'later', when he saw James's face. He was sorry that his parents had interrupted them, but not sorry it had happened. Malcolm touched his face again and whatever control over his arousal he had gained was gone as James pressed into his hand. "Will you come to dinner, New Year's Eve?"
James smiled wide and looked at Malcolm with joy. "Of course."
After Malcolm left, James was half-expecting the third degree from his parents. But they had both gone to bed, leaving James alone to do whatever he wanted. He went to bed, stripping out of his dress uniform. When he got down to his boxers, he was dismayed at the mostly transparent cotton. As he went to relieve himself in the bathroom, his pubic hair was matted and sticky, his balls soaking in his excitement. Who knew he could have gotten so excited? James reclined in his bed, thinking about stroking his still plump shaft to thoughts of what had just happened but instead rolled over and fell asleep to dream of Malcolm instead.
- COMMENTS
4avidreaderover 2 years agoThis couldn't have been written more perfectly! I loved it...and am getting the biggest kick out of Malcolm's inner thoughts!
Haphaestion2004about 9 years agoI just want more and more !! Too exciting for words ... Beautifully written.
But, what about poor Alec ?
dairetoover 10 years agoThe characters are fantastic.
Especially the parents - what great people
sachiaikoover 17 years agoHey sweetie -
First and formost, i want to say that i love nearly everything that you write. So far as Literotica.com is concerned you are one of the best authors to grace this site, and i want you to know that.
That said, i must mention to you that i was a little disapointed. I've followed you as you've grown as a writer, from before when you put very little dialog into your stories, but did not lack in any heart, to your more recent stories as the dialog has kicked up a notch and you've only improved as far as i'm concerned. But this story... well, the premis is excelent if you ask me, however the delivery isnt your normal BANG. You missed words in your sentances, the gramar needed to be worked on, enough that me, who doesnt generally care about gramar so long as the story is good, was hard pressed to read the whole thing.
Some of the sentances just didn't make a whole lot of sense to me, not because your writing is bad but because the grammar was lacking. However, even that wouldn't have been enough to rate the story as i did (a 3) - you also moved the story very quick, too quick to be believeable to me, the characters don't know one another, barely dialog, but they are already pouncing on each other - this isnt normally how you write so i'm a little confused. The transition from the kissing to being walked in on was a bit awkward, for example, there was nothing in the writing to indicate that they'd been kissing so long until after they were interupted, then afterwards you didn't indicate when his parents left. The whole thing just was confusing to me.
I would have so much prefered to write this to you in private, however, i'm a writer too and i know how important CONSTRUCTIVE Crit can be, and i wanted to give you an honest and supportive feedback because i respect you as an author (Very much)
Please take this for what it is, a kind and constructive set of comments meant to help you in your future works. I really do believe you to be one of the best authors on this site, and i hope this doesnt make you feel bad.
Good luck my friend,
Sachi :)
PS, if you wanna chat more about what i have said, feel free to write me at any time.
DWSimonalmost 18 years agoAuthorI meant nuclear sub, as in nuclear powered, so I should clarify in the future. I had no clue that the Secret Service didn't watch out for the whole family. I knew that his meteroic rise in rank was illogical, but I plead literary license. :)
Anyone else who finds logic loops or want to give me feedback, please, send it to me. I love to hear it.
DW Simon
Anonymousabout 18 years agoWell, you've made another great story. Your characters are ALWAYS very much alive. The hairy them is a little weird, but that's just me. I have a few continuity flaws to note.
(1) Secret Service does NOT protect adult children of presidents.
(2) Captain in the Navy is equivalent to full Colonel in the other services (ie O-6 pay grade). There is just no way someone could have achieved that rank at the young age of 27. A succesful Annapolis graduate might have JUST made Lieutenant (O-3).
(3) He would never be allowed to captain a nuclear submarine. Those ships have the power to tactically control most 3rd-world countries.
Anonymousabout 18 years agoI was touched it was a warm and moving story.
I also ejyoyed the erotic parts especially the kissing .
I hope the president's son finds love with honourable senator
Keep up the great work
warmest wishes
hotcherryabout 18 years agoI love your work and can't wait to continue reading it. You have a way with cpaturing the raw emotion and tnederness of the characters. I hope you are able to continue writing many more stories in the future. I have read all of your stories several times ad Look forward to new works.
