- First Time
- Silent-Night
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We didn't sleep. We touched and talked and kissed and agreed we wouldn't fuck, it would be stupid, dangerous, she might get pregnant, but fucking was all we wanted and we waved goodbye to virginity within an hour of our solemn resolve, a gentle mostly painless penetration to break the way. She inspected my penis for traces of her virgin blood, mildly disappointed that she's bled less than she'd imagined and relieved it had hurt less than she'd expected. We fucked in the Christmas dawn with the curtains thrown open and the snow outside deep and crisp and even, and in entering Miriam I found myself.
If you've enjoyed the read, please vote and post a comment. Merry Christmas.
- COMMENTS
Boxlicker101over 18 years agobut hot, nonetheless. I enjoyed the contrast between their first time together and their married love and eroticism. Like Rumps, I didn't care much for the rambling sentences, and sometimes you changed tenses but, for all that, it was a damn good story.
Rumple Foreskinover 18 years agoI like the characters, the original presentation, and the plotting. That's why the story earned a five. However, I just can't claim to love a story with 90 word sentences and 10C for tenth century. That's why I rated it only 75%.
I can sense your broken heart. :) Good luck in the contest.
Rumple
Unsung Museover 18 years agoFluid, honest & engaging... great work!
Very best of luck to you in the contest...
Anonymousover 18 years agoGreat work, Neon. You've showed us how losing one's virginity should be like, sensual and tender. Good luck.
matriarchover 18 years agoWwhen one of my favourite Lit authors can still reduce this wizened oldie to tears, I know its a good story. And you did. Partly from memories of past Christmas Eves with my own children, the sudden memories that had me gasping with emotion, the magic, and then you went and added love, romance and gentleness, and beautifully written sex. Good heavens Neon, that's just plain unfair. But all the same, I loved it. Thank you. Mat
