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Click here"You were going to leave me," I cried.
"I'm sorry," he said, his voice full of remorse. "I'm so sorry."
We were moving in a slow rhythm, our bodies rising and falling like a wave beneath the sheets. "Yes," I breathed. "Yes." My face screwed up with ecstasy. "Cum inside me, Kevin. Cum inside me and never let me go."
His arms were wrapped around my body, holding me to him. I heard him start to moan into the pillow beside my head. "I love you so much," I cried at the last second. A low, desperate groan escaped his lips, almost like a sob of pain. And then I was groaning too as he came inside me. There was so much more than the first time and it was so much warmer. It was like fire spilling into my vagina, cascading over my opening and disappearing into my womb. The muscles clamped down hungrily and elicited every drop with an unquenchable thirst. I was only vaguely aware of it though, as my own orgasm tore through me like a hurricane and left only exhaustion in its wake. I cried out so loud that if mum or dad were home they would definitely have heard it. I dug my nails into Kevin's back and buried my head against him, screaming into his shoulder.
My screams were mingled with sobs of happiness, I think, or perhaps fear at how close I had been to losing him. His weight on me was the most comforting thing in the world and I never wanted him to move. We lay a long while together, even after both our orgasms were nothing but pleasant memories. I moved my head around to find Kevin's lips and kissed him fiercely.
"I'm sorry," he said again.
"Shh," I whispered, stroking his hair. I held him to me tightly, unwilling to let even a tiny cavity of air exist between us. We may have lain there for an hour, or ten minutes, or an eternity – I don't know how long it was. It seemed all to short, though, when Kevin was getting off me.
I reached out for him desperately. "No," I said. "Stay here. Stay here and lie with me."
"I can't," he replied. "Mum and dad might be home soon...." Somehow the words 'if they're not already' echoed in the air between us. I was sure, though, that if they had heard anything, we wouldn't be alive. I conceded reluctantly and let my hand fall away from his arm.
"I love you," I said with as much feeling as I could muster.
He laid a hand against my cheek. "I love you, too." Another kiss and then he was leaving the room. My gaze lingered on the door for several minutes after he'd left. I finally came to my senses and blinked several times before curling up in bed and hugging my pillow for the lack of Kevin. I could still smell his body on the bed; the pleasant, woody smell of his cologne or deodorant or whatever it was. Maybe he smelled like that naturally. It soothed me to sleep though, and I slept like a baby.
- COMMENTS
Rancher46almost 2 years agoStory had so much potential, and the author failed to complete the story and seeing that it was published 10/10/04 it probably will never be finished. Sad as I would have given it a 5 rating but being unfinished, I will give it a 3/5
shollingover 3 years agoCould have been a great story but in the end you left us hanging so only three stars. What's the resolution? Did they live happily ever after? What happens now?
FuckerKingalmost 4 years agoI love it. it it one of the best story i ever had. i dont know what to say but ust think its best best best best i like and i know everyone like please release more chapter i need 10s of chapter with 5-5 pages please we are ready to read it
Anonymousover 4 years agoNot like a drunken frat boy fantasy. Charicter's feel real. Looking forward to the next chapter.
PrinceLukeover 4 years agoFirst of all this was amazing, An easy 5 stars. Secondly I love the story and the emotions and the love they share. Eventually they will have to come out to their parents, cant wait to see how that goes xD. Finally why did you stop? where is the rest? i need many, many, many more chapters of this!!!
thedayafteralmost 7 years agoIt's a real shame that this author has stopped putting up stories on Lit. This story brings home the pathos and difficulties young sibling love has to endure. I hope this author still writes as there is a lot of talent in the writing.
Anonymousabout 7 years agoNow sir,you never fail to amaze me.Just how finely was your idea materialised into the story was magnificent.It left me in awe and by the end I was overwhelmed by the beauty I had just witnessed.I would have cried as well had it ended the way it threatened to do,as all the great stories upon this subject have come to a close;but no, I wouldn't have settled for it.
It all brings me to the question as to why have you not been in the writing industry other than erotica,you could've fared much better than most already do.But then who knows you already might be an established writer,perhaps that is as much your works suggest.It will always be a pain to have never known you or even more so that you wouldn't be reading this.And it grieves me that I cannot tell you what I wouldn't give to have this story completed to a more satisfying result,just as I wish for PoF - of which I must say,as I have already dwelled,is hall of fame material.A brief continuation could have worked for this story (or even none at all) but I can never settle with the thought of PoF remaining unfinished.Perhaps it will settle for your legacy.
This is probably the last comment I'll be leaving on a story of yours for I cannot do with anymore of such painful unfinished legends,the only one of which I hold against you is Infatuation - not because you never finished it but because you started writing it.It was dull,really, and comprised mostly of tomfoolery and even harassment at times.Still
,for everything except that I am forever indebted to you; whatever unfortunate fate might have snatched you from us is unforgivable.
This is ruchirsaini@yahoo.com and I leave this here if ever Vertigoj might wander upon his wonders and find it,among many others,as a testament of my admiration to his skills.
Let no such thought consume us if kept within,but let us unleash it all over for the world to see,for it brings great relief to ourselves.
Thank you.Long live Vertigoj!!!
