All Comments on 'DC&H'

Good work. Was well written.

So much for fair business practices. The wife wanted “it all” too much. Life seldom works that way. Enjoyed the “happy ending”. 5*.

Very good story... the MC was very smart ... his wife was a sociopath liar... 5 stars

Story was so-so but I gave you a 5 for Dewey, Cheatem and Howe.

KK, please help me understand this - According to you, Kathy's ambition appears to be the sole element driving her actions. You describes Kathy as a corporate whore, however has a hard time doing what corporate whore do, and that's fuck a client. She apparently must have strong feelings for Hansen, as she appears to be ready to have his kid, and continues to try for a month after her husband dumps her, and with near certainty that he would end up in the pen. However, you us that Kathy was only using Hansen to get promoted. What?

So many holes in her story starting with she could go to the FBI and report the blackmail. They were mismatched - he was smart and she was not. Good story about a bad wife.

Liked it but wonder how he? could see his naked wife in his own house with another man and let that slide right 0n by. Makes no sense to me.

Eh? some plot holes and a page or so too long. good parts are "Making" Mr. Benson and the speech exposing everyone.

Should have spent more time on developing your story. Too many contradictions with the characters traits. However, I do appreciate the fact that the wife was actually cheating, and it wasn't all part of a FBI investigation.

5*

Kathy wanted her cake and eat it too. Ended up teaching at a CC, presumably for a pittance.

An extremely well written story with a massive twist at the end that I only saw coming because of the story introduction when his wife was merely referred to as "my wife". I felt that you left it intentionally ambiguous and so I was looking for a false reconciliation when the FBI agent started seemingly constructing an alibi for Kathy.