All Comments on 'A Boo-boo for Daddy'

Yes you, the one who said I'm writing these glowing reviews myself. Well, there are a 100 comments on this story. Which ones do you think I wrote? Surely you can come up with

. . . 50 . . . 25 . . . 10? Oh c'mon, you can do it. Seeing that you have accused me of fraud.

I'm not into daddy/daughter incest but you mention in

your future story "Stuffing Sis" you will be having a

sexual relationship with your younger brother. Could

you make his name Scott?

Thanks

Just wanted to say: as beautiful as you obviously

are I think your mind is more so. I discharged a

large amount of semen regarding anal penetration of

dear-ol-dad. Thanks for the wanks!!!

to be really erotic. The dialogue was a little too campy for me.

Sorry but something was missing. Plot,story, something. Two pages of crude words don't make a story. Sorry.

That story like all the rest of yours got me so hot, i don't htink i've cum that hard in a long long time. But just thinking about that sexy body of yours in all those costumes just made me let loose. I can't wait until your next one cause I want to imagine you being on your knees in front of me while i read it.

OMG, what a great story, and what a wonderful present for an incredibly lucky Daddy. If only all daddies were as fortunate as this one.

Beautiful writing Sarahhh, and a delicious story-line. Keep writing, please

Scriptusest

I enjoy this erotic tale, Sarah. I like the way you added present events to the story giving it a marker for history. Just want you to know your hard work here at lit erotica is appreciated. ……

Charmed

Pete

Another great story Sarah, you really know how to satisify your readers

...but sloppy 110th's? (public comments, that is)

Hot, fast, fun read. You do have a knack for this genre. Good to have you back.

Rumple Foreskin :cool:

Well done - another great one. Cannot wait for your stories to become movies.

first i almost came half way through the story. i was hard as a rock. i had on jeans and it was visible. just the thought of seeing sarah with another girl and they dont know you are watching was sending me over the edge. its a good thing you didnt go into vast detail about that, cause i would have never made it to the end of the story in one piece or dry. and to think this story isnt even really over. there is jasmine the brother coming home. oh my goodness let the party begin. i also cant forget the blue dildo, that has always been a fantsay of mine. when i read that i'm ready for more. sarahhhh bring it on and dont hold back at all.

other then that i thought the story was quite good. (smile wink wink awsome) keith

This was really hot. Not all that much of a plot, but who am I to complain about that. I enjoyed it although the dialogue was a bit hard to believe.

I enjoyed the story line & the story. I an a fan of incest stories, as well as impregnation stories.

it would be fantastic, to read about Jasmine & sarah, having a 3some with sarah's dad, in which both girls became pregnant

Once again, dear sweet Sarahhh has proven her abilities to take us all to a place where we all want to go... in our minds, and in our fantasies... I loved the costumes, but have to admit liking the cat-women cotume the best. great story; great tease... I just hope she follows through with the sequel... and I think she might have just found her most erotic expression of all in writing about incest...

I gotta say the language works for me...Looking forward to the next chapter where she packs some fudge with the old man! Hmmm maybe a trip to school and a visit to the professor would be a hot story!!! Keep up the good work sarahhh!

Sarah, you sweet little slut, once again you have caused my cock to throb and pulsate, causing me to take action to releave it. Once again my computer desk is covered with jism, when it should have been pumped deep inside your hot fucking pussy.

Only trouble this time my daughter hopped onto the computer while I was cleaning myself up, when she saw your story, she started acting very erotic, and I was forced to stand behind her and "fuck" her shit hole as she lusted at the thought of you and Jasmine together.

Why don't you join us and show us the wicked tricks you have learnt from your Halloween experiences?

Damn Sarah, you did it again...I'm still stroking to your story as I type this. Sounds funny, but I'd do anything to be one of your family members! lol

Keep up the good work...maybe I'll send you a few pics after a while. ;)

Loved it baby. I would love for you to ride my hard dick reverse so you could rub your clit against my hard dick and have you cum all over me. Love Daddy Ethan

Not really into the daughter/ father, but sarahhh can spin a story that jsut sucks you in. =) Love the outfits. A really hot story.

Another superb story, hot and very sexy!

I love your stories. Another A+++

Your friend

Paul

Sarah, This is another of your hot stories and loved it as always.

mmm little red ridin hood xxx

Sarah,

I apologize for taking so long to read this story. It is perfect - almost as if you wrote it for me. I think that is a part of your charm, making so many feel that way.

Talk to you soon.

Jeff

Sarah once again you hit the mark with this story. The sly humor and your wording are wonderful. There were times I was laughing and cumming at the same time.

Can not wait for your next story. Keep up the great work.

SM from OH

Great story Sarah,

Loved all the costumes. Would love to see everyone.Can't wait for your next adventure. Would love to find out what happened Thanksgiving.

John

Sarah - Loved the story - as usual, you have a way with words and make the sex hot. Keep it up!

Can u blame her Dad for going after that Catwoman costume? With tits like Sarah's, why wouldn't he?

Sarah has done it again. Puts vision into her words. What a nice halloween present for daddy.

Sarah has done it again.......wording to provide vision at the same time..she is blessed with erotica ability......

Sarah, you never fail to amaze me with your sordid tales of lust. As for the author of "Drivel"...insult your "intelligence"? You did an excellent job of that yourself when you mentioned that Sarah writes only of incest. You should do further research before asserting your "intellectual opinions". Drop dead, you booger-eating moron!

Sarah, thanks again for another lusty tale. I'm off to read "Satan's Slut" now. Have you had any fun with the "license" email? lol

You Know Who

Not the hottest story you've written, my opinion, but definately one of the funniest. Really good job.

To the annon idiot with two degrees--college degrees do not equate to IQ, I know, I have several more than you do. You rate IQ by an IQ test, gee who'd have guessed that.

Thanks Sarahhh for your wonderful efforts.

the idea was good but the actual writing and flow of ideas needs work

loved ur story!! it was amazing!! i came sooo much!! makes me want my dad 2 fuck me;)

Sarah - you are the daughter i have always wanted.

You have a really imaginative mind, i enjoyed it very much please write some more.

Sarah...I think you story has its charms. The ultimate taboo is daddy and daughter sex. My daughter is grown now and makes me think that it would be really hot. Did you have a thing for your father?

This story is hot. No second doubts.

Sarah,

Would your daddy mind if I was a "Pinch-hitter" for him?

My wife is watching TV and I had a "Throbbing Bone" that has a "Boo-Boo". Oh Nurse, can you help me?

Jim (Future: HotDadForHotFun45)

Sarah! My pussy is already wet. But i am very unhappy, i don't have a dad like u have. My brother is near me. I gave him a good breastfeeding after reading the story, "Breast feeding my brother". I am already wild. And I need ur friendship Sarah!

I have a whole new idea for the coming halloween!!

Your dad is so lucky, I wish I were him or could atleast take his place every now and then. This story is smokin HOT.

Absolutely loved it, gotta go read with my vibe!

Thank you!

Loved the story - especially with all the costumes.

Sarah,

I have loved every one of your stories that I have read. Please keep up the good work.

Uncle Jim

This is the best story ever. Would give anything to read the rest. How come you never continued on this story? It could be even better...

Loved it, love you...

this was really awsome read! i loved the costume mix up too in here. heh but i cant read vary many of these a day or i may hurt something ^.^

Needs a little more detail. Let us in on a little more of the action. Very good turn on. Maybe I should have thought of that years ago.

But it kind of grates on my nerves the way the characters speak to each other...could be a little more modern day perhaps - even if it is meant to be humorous?

After Halloween of 08 I have a new respect for what a girl will go thru to seduce her dad. Mine adventure of course was with my god daughter she was so jealous of me and her mother I thought she would kill one of us before she was able to get between us, and I don't mean that in the way like she broke us up... It was a new experience for her mother for sure who I am sure never had the least impure thought about her little girl, but dressed in that skimpy pirate costume on Halloween there was no way either of us could resist her.

Thanks for writing this one. It brings me to the room like I an an unseen onlooker. The intensity is just right and you smoothly convince that its worth positive much more than negative. I loved this one Sarahhh.

Thanks for writing this one.

W

It is a bit to rushed and could use some more background.

I love the concept, Dad is a lucky man, so I assume Jasmine will be in upcoming installments, I would rather see Dad a little more the aggressor and in control, but that is just me. Look forward to more.

I can't tell you ow you made my boner feel. Every father should have a daughter like you.

I can never read daughter and father stories b/c every writer uses the word daddy making the daughter sound mentally retarded its cute for a 4 or 5 year old but a grown ass woman? Not cute at all. I don't see mother and son stories were the son is going around saying mommy its just awful

I enjoyed this story! It made me laugh especially with the great costuming and play on words. It was a bit rushed, BUT considering she was home only for one day, it actually came out ok.

And at first I did think it too sudden that they fell into a sexual relationship, but after the "planting the seed" of him watching her and her friend while he was in the closet with her panties on it is a bit more believable. He was already a little deviant! *winks* But would be nice to see more there, too, and will be interesting to see a little more character development of Sarah and her father, even before her brother.

But of course, now that I think of it, sometimes people write just for the sexual gratification and there are those who read purely for that reason as well. Then, you have those who write deeper stories that have complex plots and characters, and you have those who love to read those kinds of works as well. I happen to be both and do both myself, so if a writer aspires to do either, neither or both, it is completely their prerogative, and I just enjoy their works as I will. And hopefully, whatever their intent for writing their story is, I get.

So, please do keep writing; I am looking forward to seeing how your next installment comes out.

very good story i would love details on the movie and more stories

This was a nice story, but since most of your stories are INCEST, you must have done this in your real life. How interesting. Love you pic. Keep writing.

You are lovely & amazing... please continue...

Always naughty, cute, funny and sweet!

The family that plays together.....

Seems like his daughter had had some of the same ideas he had as there wasn't too much foreplay before the got down to business. Very enjoyable story and a nice fantasy piece. Thank you for sharing your vision and talent.

VERY GOOD STORY. REALLY ENJOYED IT . SHECIS REALLY HOT