- Non-Erotic Poetry
- The Reward
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Click herelight travel through this life.
not holding on to much
from place to place
If you have nothing,
no one can take it away
and desire is discontent.
Friends are the reward
of a life well lived.
Something that can never be lost.
Even when they walk away
and people do
bits and pieces are part of me
and bring me home.
- COMMENTS
Honey123over 18 years agoand love...your words hold much weight ~ simply put, yet beautifully worded..
~Honey
RhymeFairyalmost 19 years agoWow... Nice lil poem.
I loved your wording.
Tight and kept me till the end.
The message... two thumbs up..
Ya got my vote here~!!
More Please~
BlackShanglanover 19 years agoLean, tight, simple, and strong. Wonderful work with a real power to it.
Anonymousover 19 years agoLoved this.. very simple but so deep.. makes one feel, think and reflect on just how they are leading their life..
Powerful write~
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Du~
sackover 19 years agoAs I would expect. You might want to try "reward for" instead of "reward of". Be careful of your tenses, toward the end you go from plural to singular (something) and back to plural again. Minor, minor, minor things, but I know you are a perfectionist!
nikkijamesover 19 years agoLoved it Carson! You are ultimately my fave Lit author and this has just set that even more in my mind. Keep up the awesome work hun.
