- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Tease My Empty Heart
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Click hereWhy must you tease my empty heart?
What has my heart done to you,
To slice, dice, and when you’re through,
Toss it back to me all shredded
With pain so very deeply embedded?
Why must you tease my empty heart?
I hope throughout each passing day
Your angst will somehow give way
To something peaceful, warm and pure,
So my love for you will endure.
You’ll do anything I say I fear
To keep my loving ways so near
Until your need to hurt me comes
And my heart’s love blood runs
Leaving it aching and restless.
Dam you to hell for now but, “Yes!”
I’ll say when you come again
And I’ll think dam you to hell and then
Beg for your embrace and your kiss
Feeling so much painful bliss!
Why must you tease my empty heart?
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 19 years agovery nice poem gina...seems like someone hurt u real bad...i hope he/she gets his....and i hope you find someone
YoungJasonabout 19 years agoI enjoyed reading your poem, I have felt that way myself, and you put it so well, thank you :)
LadyJeanneover 19 years agois a little drop of anguish in the pool neither of you can help but stir. I can feel the ache. Very moving.
Anonymousover 19 years agoGina you keep getting better n' better. This is the lady's anthem, with mixed emotions and weakness. The question every woman wants to know "why do you tease my empty heart"? What's up wit that? LoL!
Ebby from OM
greeneyeredheadover 19 years agoGina ... thank you for sharing this ... my heart aches in response, in memory, and in empathy - for you, for me, for all those I love who find themselves so fraught. Your heart may be many things, but empty I do not sense. I love your sense of timing and balance. I look forward to reading more of you ...
Green
Xplorer_69xover 19 years agoYou truly have a way of describing things Gina that makes one feel what you're saying.
Keep up the good work!
In Anticipationover 19 years agoI really liked it. Think it would be great to hear it read out loud, but I wasn't going to do that here on my own.
lovelovegirlover 19 years agoThanks gina
Makes me have a quite different picture if you and see into your soul. I love what I see.
Made tears come into my eyes and I did think about it long after I finished reading it.
Your friend
lovegirl
kcxxxover 19 years agoI enjoy your writing very much. its clever but unpretencious. Witty and charming.
Anonymousover 19 years agoyou seem like you have so much pain and all you ask for is someone to love you for who your are and i hope you find that.
