Still Pond

for others to imbibe. TK U MLJ LV NV

Enjoyed the feel of your words over the view behind them.

Anyone who has ever spent time in the quiet of a sleepy pond can appreciate the beautiful picture accompanying this rendering. Both compliment each other nicely.

The photograph as well as the poem. I especially loved the last line. A little suggestion though, the yellow font does not really go well with me, perhaps a less obvious colour...?

-DP.

to see one of my favorite photos come to life with your beautiful words. Keep up the good work :)

images of tranquility.

your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey

as well at the image. I'd love to see the photo in black and white and the font a bit more subdued.

though I like the poem in and of itself more--I think a larger font and white lettering would make it just perfect--pull the piece together more. I know this was your first effort though and with your poetic talents, you'll just keep getting better. ;)

Kudos.

Tess