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Click hereShe’ll dip you in her bottle of sin,
twirling its potion to spilled erotic,
measure up your lengthy straw,
bend tip to rim
and then,
sip slowly.
like your use of line and rhythm ... seems to both slow down and speed up ... which seems right.
- and sly. I found myself smiling as I read this one. I like it, blue.
Tess
i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temperature rating i've given you is so that it does not affect future temp ratings. - wildsweetone.