- Illustrated Poetry
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- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoHolding you for only a few moments I still feel you there ~ a phantom Love.
damppantiesabout 18 years agoWhen you look at it, there's nothing exceptional about anything in particular in the poem or the way it's presented. However, taken together, it took my breath away. There's just something about the words that reached out to me. I felt it.
Anonymousover 18 years agoSimple, but incredibly intense. Makes me sigh with longing. Soon, love. Soon the phantom will become flesh - for both of us. XXX
Kaishakuover 18 years agothe phantom love... lover or is it in the smoke. A grip deeper than any lost lover I think. Is it someone you miss like a missing limb... or something else. In the smoke.
Well done, you made this non smoker understand the pain, the loss.
k.
RhymeFairyover 18 years agoI loved the illustration and
the wording is perfection.
Love the dreamlike quality
you put into this poem.
A sweet trip into dreamland.
Now if'n we could All
just catch hold on our Phantom
loves, then we would neva let go eh ~
*Smiles*
My Fav. today of the illustrated poetry ~!!
