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Click herelove is a shrine
shadow cast
from formless fever
a duel death
fracturing orgasmic pinions
fortified by lightning
magnified
Describing the action is easy, describing the feeling next to impossible. You make it look easy.
That exhultant moment captured so well — at least till he rolls over and falls asleep...
witty word wizard (~_~) reminds me of... the sound of sunshine... nice write blue.
i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum - wildsweetone
What? Your poem is skimming over the top of my brain and not really sinking in. I pretty much get it, but it's not one of those sink-in-and-stay-with-you kind of poems. Maybe it's just me being a lame reader. ;) Anyway... it sounds pretty.