Mercury Mood

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Lightheaded and legs weak; can’t eat, drink, sleep or speak
I’m coming down again with fornication flu
Heart’s racing at code blue speed for the bed meds that I need;
the mass doses of a hard and naked you

Symptoms starting to emerge; my boiling blood begins to surge
hallucinations getting wild and kinky real
Chills run up and down my spine as your body examines mine
Now ‘I.C.U.’ takes on a whole new sex appeal

My temperature’s on the rise, from my lips down to my thighs
I feel a lust disease just aching to break out
Your tongue licks me ‘til I shake, you make my body cum and quake
with your wet therapy for cunninlingus gout

The mercury’s stable in this phase of my post orgasmic haze
though I’m still shivering from my tits down to my toes
Body glistens like cellophane; then my fever spikes again
as the milk white shot of a lover’s passion flows

That last injection I received, can only be perceived
as the cure-all for all my sex thrill ills
Or until I’m bed ridden once more; until I’m ridden to the floor
when again my mercury mood needs Dr. Love’s...special skills

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CaPic267CaPic267about 18 years ago
To Be Unwell!

With the right doctor making house calls, here is a disease to catch and never recover from. Now to just get that doctor with that special touch! CP

SweetDealSweetDealabout 18 years ago
Fornication Flu!!!

Now I've heard everything. Just hoping they NEVER come up with a pill to cure that disease. In fact, here's hoping for a widespread outbreak! I can't wait to be bedridden! Or is that ridden in the bed?

OSoBuffOSoBuffabout 18 years ago
Fornication flu beats bird flu any day!!!

Now here's a disease that needs no cure---let there be regular outbreaks of fornication flu! Heck--sounds more real than the staging of flu for birds!

xcunning_linguistxxcunning_linguistxabout 18 years ago
Shee-yit!

It's so hard to write a sex poem that isn't LAME with a capital everything, but you sure as hell did! Excellent. :D

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Calling Dr. Love

WoW Girlfriend........I think I need to make an appointment with the Dr......SASSY

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Whoa......

Ask Sam and Dave sang "Hold ON I'm Cumxx....Coming"

Feel better now don't you? Loved it and danced to it.

sandspike

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyabout 18 years ago
Wow !!

Sizzle right on through and give me some more !! I love the build up, the imagery and just plane hot lil read. It reads a bit more like a story, I would have trimmed it a bit, but I write'm short, so that's just me probably. Love this !! More Please ~

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
sexual healing <grin

I can only say that I was going to write a poem about sexual healing and after reading this poem, well, it is a much better example of sexual healing than what I was going to scribble <grin I enjoyed your write.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I like that line

I like the line 'as the milk white shot of a lover’s passion flows' Helps with visual building blocks

Sarah

PatHous56PatHous56about 18 years ago
Playing Hooky

You caught me playing hooky on this perfect spring day but I had best not tell my boss I came down with fornication flu. But yours is a wonderful play on words. For this disease, the card you want will say "Don't Get Well Soon!"

Patricia

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