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- Just Hope For The Worst
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Click hereI strived to be pure white silk
blowing in the breeze
peaceful as a dove
in the morning mist,
but
I am the raven
in the haze
the ripped and yellowed jeans
overdecorated, complicated..
goddamn I tried so hard.
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msboy8almost 19 years agoVery Touching
We all strive for the best, sometimes too high. Perhaps more realitic expectations will lesson the fall. Good job, your poem made me think.
RhymeFairyalmost 19 years agoPowerful~!!
A powerful punch in the gut here.
I can feel your hope ... pain...
Loved it~!!!
