- Illustrated Poetry
- "I tremble..."
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoI really enjoyed this writing, the end was amazing.
Keep writing.
LeBrozalmost 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,500 poems.
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Munachiover 17 years agohm, can't believe i haven't looked at your poetry yet... have to read more now...
Amyfriendover 17 years agoPassion abounds, brought to life by an erotic picture of a woman's beautiful curves...along with sensual words. Excellent.
duddle146over 17 years agoThe sensuousness of some of your lines are arousing. "...Bridges in revisited folds." Intensely erotic! Beautiful rendering. Loved the picture.
LeBrozover 17 years agoOne of the rare poets on the site who consistently weds words to quality images.
echoes_salmost 20 years agoto fall upon your words and devour each, then became splashed with warm paint
Jacobo_Curiousalmost 20 years agoYour poems are always excellent... it's impossible not to see your tremendous passion. I've missed reading them... :)
jthserraabout 20 years agoand an image. A slightly fermented passion... well done.
jim : )
