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Click hereAgain a lover's breath to end all fright,
aligning fates igniting virgin stars.
Tonight a comet falls and fades on Mars
but you remain in orbit burning white.
Again to stellar song and cosmic praise.
I kiss your lips and soothe your sparkling skin
to tranquil turmoil blazing deep within,
and watch the Libra glitter in your face.
To Pleiad smiles and Luna blush ablaze
you whisper "Stars are burning, planets spin,
but can they hear the music in a heart?"
"We sing," I say "by adding days to days,
anew each morning, spinning twin to twin,
and reinvented love tells kins apart."
You pull me closer, watching Venus' flight,
a tiny spark of magic matching ours,
and run your fingers tracing ancient scars.
"You are my song," you sigh into the night.
Again a breath, a lover's arms, a start,
as thoughts of cosmic cadence soon depart.
All these incredible images and metaphor...
Somehow managed to be worked into such a rigid form?
It's like watching gazelle running down a highway.
Lovely! Perks already quoted the lines I would have. Simply lovely. Man! I'm looking forward to the shoot-out at the old corral.
Lovely! Perks already quoted the lines I would have. Simply lovely. Man! I'm looking forward to the shoot-out at the old corral.
I wish I had a man that would write stuff like this for me!! I'd be on my knees throught eternity, I cant choose my favorite part, its the entire poem!!
BT!!!
you are indeed a worthy opponent. I just love the way you write. Maybe we should get rid of the six guns and just go have a drink, cause hell, I wanna be on your team. *grin*
this is the best part for me
"Tonight a comet falls and fades on Mars
but you remain in orbit burning white.
Again to stellar song and cosmic praise.
I kiss your lips and soothe your sparkling skin
to tranquil turmoil blazing deep within,
and watch the Libra glitter in your face"
maybe I'm swayed by the fact that I'm a libra, but I loved the imagery.
oh, I liked this too
"and run your fingers tracing ancient scars" poignant!
and of course, you had perfect meter.