- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Flying
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Click hereSoaring,
Smiling,
Beautiful.
From what used to be a
Dark
Huddled
Mass.
There was a
Wrenching,
Tearing,
Breaking
And a soul was
Freed,
Loosed,
Wild.
It revels in it’s
New
Wonderful
Rebirth.
It has found
Joy,
Faith,
Strength.
Now it is
Singing,
Flying,
Laughing
Where it had been
Oppressed,
Smothered,
Broken.
Freedom is becoming.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 18 years agoThis piece is all the more emotional because I know it comes right from the heart. It tells honestly of your feelings at a time of change and I think it will touch more readers than you could have guessed when you wrote it.
Thank you for sharing it.
Chris
LeBrozover 18 years agoA different style
Not quite conventional
The gasping exhiliration of release...
hugo_samover 18 years agoThe spirit emerging from the shadows to soar as it should. Joyous, hopefull poem. Well done. Great, happy feelling.
Thank you.
Aurora Blackover 18 years agoVery beautiful work, Ent. It made me think of a butterfly emerging from the cocoon to fly free, leaving the hard shell of its former life behind. Congrats.
