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Click herei am the wine of peace
lingering on your lips
drink me
lest i fear
i am the river of hope
drowning you in desire
swim in me
lest i doubt
i am the blood of passion
burning in your veins
flow through me
lest i cool
i am the sweat of sex
dripping from your chin
satisfy me
lest i dry
i am the nectar of night
quenching your thirst
thank me
lest i wither
i am the dew of dreams
your morning memory
savor me
lest i forget
i am the water of truth
soothing your soul
hold me
lest i slip through your fingers
excited passion..and brings forth beautiful images. Very well done.
breath taking.
im glad i stole these few moments to revel in your words.
...and the lack of capitalization lend themselves to the vizualization I get when I read this, helping my imagination find it's way to a destination that is uniquely mine...but hopefully somewhere near where you intended the reader to wind up....well done.
alessia
I voted you a 5 because you made me smile. Your tender words are a soothing relief from the poetry forum, you are wise not to frequent on a day like toady' keep up the good work
maria
Made me shiver all over! I can hear you speaking the words, and... just damn.
Your poem was mentioned in today's new poem reviews.