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Click hereflesh in flesh
intermeshed
so tightly
we are interwound
the air we laugh
we grasp
O
what
sound
with
crickets on the ground
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Maria2394about 19 years agomy turtles
love crickets!!
I like the Whitman-esque feel to this, good work:)
dcpoet44about 19 years agothe physical...
presence at the end of this piece is what makes it magnificent......great ending!
sexmateabout 19 years agoYOU ARE NEVER ALONE!
For even during the act, The crescindo of noise outside is almost deafening!
Nice!
Anonymousabout 19 years agocrickets!
oh the last line caught me off guard, I love being caught off guard.
