- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Bluest Fields
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Click herewithin bluest fields deep
greener grass breathes
a fertile caress of promise
within bluest fields deep
passion‛s prayer blooms
with wild flowering surrender
within bluest fields deep
succulent steel bows
to sate ravenous hope
within bluest fields deep
haunting hunger blurs
the feral lines of convention
within bluest fields deep
crystalline chaos burns
into naked imagination
sizzling dreams thaw my nights
within the magnetic pools
of bluest fields deep
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- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 17 years agoThis poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 35,000 poems.
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Anonymousabout 19 years agowithin bluest fields deep
greener grass breathes
a fertile caress of promise
sounds like someone has been sniffing manure
Belegonover 19 years ago...this form despite a notable lack of success in my own usage. It creates the feeling that you are expanding multiple views on a single theme and is very effective here.
Lisa Dentonover 19 years agoThe picture painted in my mind with the phrase "within bluest fields deep" is beautiful, thank you.
Awful Arthurover 19 years agoI love the use of repeated alliteration. Fantastic poem.
My Erotic Taleover 19 years agohas done it again...
this is awesome...spiraling downward
with poetic style that impressive
is so good at...great poem,,,
deep~
