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Click hereif I place my words of desire
in the source of this Popsicle attraction
would my temperature rise
in your popcorn chain of reaction
would you melt my mind with
your buttery satisfaction
while I drip cherry syrup softened
words solidified
for you,blue,
I stay till the end credits
despite the double-bill
just to see all the magic
and enjoy the last of my red whips
When I did the reviews earlier, your poem and a few others were absent. :) I like the poem but I kind of need that last rhyme. Or maybe you could make the last two lines a new stanza.
multi-tiered effect. One read, two reads, three reads, roll it around, print it, mull, read it again. Understand the feel, not necessarily the explicits, that come clear later in the night. Each time gets better.